Eileen Manassian Poet Rhyme

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Perfect Lovers

You never leave me thirsty, at the edge of love
You tilt my head and feed me sweetness from above
You never leave me burning with needs unfulfilled
You give me all I crave until my body’s thrilled

You never leave me trembling, heart assailed by fear
You bring me blessed hope whenever you draw near
You never leave me doubting, if your love is true
The love you make to me is never stale but new

You never make me feel my beauty’s tinged with age
You give me words so tender, never rough with rage
You touch my body gently as you sear my mind
You never stop until each pleasure spot you find

You never keep from me the hunger in your eyes
You never break my trust with alibis or lies
You never make me jealous of a pretty face
You never hide from me your manly show of grace

And so my darling sweet, your wish is my command
Your pleasure is my creed; I’ll serve you foot and hand
I’ll pour myself on you and drench in liquid heat
I’ll tantalize your tongue with tastes of treats so sweet 

Your queen, your slave, your mistress; name it, anything 
Now wish upon a star, that star to you I’ll bring
For nothing that you ask, would I withhold from you
Perfection is your name; your boundless love is true

Eileen M Ghali

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Richard Lamoureux September 1, 2015 at 6:52 PM I enjoyed reading this one again Eileen. Hot hot hot!

Pandita Sietesantos July 25, 2015 at 10:01 AM Hi Eileen, this piece is such a romantic stunner like only you can do, oh mistress of love, romance and passion! You have mastered this art which others will try to imititate but not duplicate! I love it and rate it a 7 hoping that one day, I too can write like this!! Pandita Eileen Manassian July 25, 2015 at 10:27 AM Oh sweetie...your write was exceptionally sweet. You are so kind to write this. I really need to read positive comments today. :) Hugs to you....

Richard Lamoureux July 23, 2015 at 8:16 PM This is indeed perfect and a 7 on the ooh ooh la la train! Eileen Manassian July 23, 2015 at 11:59 PM Thanks for the lovely comment, Richard. That Ooh la la is always a pleasure!

Demetrios Trifiatis July 23, 2015 at 12:41 PM Every man will be jealous of this perfect lover who was so lucky as to find a poetess so dear as to immortalize him without any fear! A seven for certain, dear Eileen! Eileen Manassian July 24, 2015 at 12:01 AM Poetry immortalizes and turns dreams into ideal, my dear poet. That is why we write...in hopes of capturing what must be. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen July 23, 2015 at 12:32 PM - Romance and love .... how beautiful you write this, dear Eileen! - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Eileen Manassian July 24, 2015 at 12:02 AM Thanks, my dear Anne Lise. Romance and love are second nature to me. Have a wonderful day, Birthday girl! Hugs

Kp Nunez July 23, 2015 at 12:03 PM Precious write for a precious love, Eileen. Your writing pen is back! I think Andrea has a new contest with same theme. This may be a bit longer than the example but certainly has the sweetness she wants. hugs! Eileen Manassian July 24, 2015 at 12:04 AM Thanks for informing me. I'll give the contest a miss. I haven't written for contests in some time. I wrote for Judy Konos last. I appreciate your comment.

Connie Marcum Wong July 22, 2015 at 11:12 PM Wrapped up in love....ah Eileen, this poem shares romance with a giant spoon! Lovely! Hugs, Connie 7 Eileen Manassian July 24, 2015 at 12:06 AM Thanks for that lovely comment, Connie. Giant spoon....best way to taste something sweet. Hugs to you.

Laura Breidenthal July 22, 2015 at 10:43 PM I always enjoy reading your passionate poetry. this one is gorgeous with romantic reciprocation. It is love earned by loving fully, unconditionally, without a sliver of doubt or mistrust. stunning poem! Always, Laura Eileen Manassian July 24, 2015 at 12:07 AM Doubt will always lead to sorrow, Laura. I've learned to go with my inner warning voice. The heart is unruly and must be trained and tamed. I write of what should be in a perfect loving relationship. Thank you for the visit.

Robert Lindley July 22, 2015 at 10:16 PM AHA! Back to your usual writing writing of romantic gems I see.... Such offerings are truly gifts to we that love such intimate and deep romance and thoughtful givings! A7 .. Eileen Manassian July 24, 2015 at 12:08 AM Thanks, Robert. I know my writing doesn't appeal to everyone. I'm grateful that you like it. Thanks ever so much for visiting. Hugs

Jan Allison July 22, 2015 at 3:35 PM wooohoooo the Queen of passion writes again - superb as ever Eileen:-) hugs Jan xx Eileen Manassian July 24, 2015 at 12:09 AM :) You are a sweetie pie. You know that, right???? HUGS HUGS HUGS

Nette Onclaud July 22, 2015 at 3:06 PM such a passionate write i had to sigh, eileen.. what a gem!.. huggs Eileen Manassian July 24, 2015 at 12:10 AM Now that is a post that will bring me joy. I changed the ending a little Nette. I think it reads better now. Thanks for your visit, dear. Hugs