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Perfect Love

Perfect Love Perfect love carries an impersonal touch, like silent buddahs on lotus blossoms, waiting for suffering to breathe a final, quiet sigh. Like ice on distant mountains, waiting to nourish the world below. Like a Mother hawk, hunting high, in a cloudless sky. A love so unearthly blind and beautiful, That it makes no distinction between caressing mother and child, or a perfect stranger.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/2/2012 11:25:00 PM
STUPENDOUS WRITE!!! I enjoyed this much.You truly have writing skills......Elliott.....
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Date: 5/1/2012 2:41:00 PM
Many good lines, especially the last two. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 4/20/2012 11:15:00 AM
A splendid piece, with emotive language and rich imagery. Well done, Mark... and welcome to the Soup!
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Date: 4/20/2012 7:43:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Mark. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Mark Leeper
Date: 4/20/2012 8:25:00 AM
Oh! I have a classification of poems for you. Words! I guess I'm a simple guy.
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Mark Leeper
Date: 4/20/2012 8:21:00 AM
Thanks for the invite.Thanks for the offer of the flower Carol, but spring has sprung, a few birds have sung, I'm sure there is a boquet somewhere I can share with friends or foe,you never know.Is that spelled right,ya know that word for a bunch of flowers?

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