Perfect In Every Way

She's like the essence of a coral rose 
a latent bloomer with a heart of gold 
And when she speaks to me in prose 
deep inside, she opens doors of old
 
Rosy cheeked and full of vitality 
a thriving blush in my garden of love 
Infused with life and immortality
she's been sent from up above 

A rose by any name will always be so neat   
like cupid wings when flown across the sky 
Filled with ample beauty she's replete 
soft and mellow, like a gentle sigh  

She's the perfume of my scented days,  
perfect and valuable in every way. 

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Date: 2/10/2025 2:59:00 AM
This is so beautiful dear sweet rose! I love especially “ A rose by any name will always be so neat like cupid wings when flown across the sky ” such a shakespearrean line and also your rhymes are stunning and flow of your lines truly catchy! Pleasure reading this sonnet. Sending you light always
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Date: 2/12/2025 7:46:00 PM
Thank you for reading INk
Date: 2/10/2025 1:20:00 AM
So, your friend also is a Rose for whom you have deep appreciation. Indeed a beautiful tribute. "She's the perfume of my scented days, perfect and valuable in every way." Love these concluding lines.
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Date: 2/12/2025 7:46:00 PM
Thanks for reading Valsa
Date: 2/5/2025 3:02:00 PM
Pretty sonnet tribute to your unnamed friend
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Date: 2/12/2025 7:46:00 PM
Thank you for reading Tom
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