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Perfect Brutal Lesson

To a broken anniversary Of a love lost long ago Filled with goose bumps and the memory Of a soul I can't let go. I wish I could remove the distance That set both our poles apart If I held a more delicate stance I could have cradled your heart. Despite my best intentions for us The storm still swallowed me whole Delicate plans were causing me fuss I failed to honor my role. No shame of our moment together Though time has lessened the thrill Our laughter will echo forever Such gratitude fills me still. If an instant of sorrow passed by Without my loving embrace Arrogance failed my perceptive eye Complacency trumping grace. Now I swim an ocean of regret Without an island in sight My mind traces back that silhouette We shared within our delight. Within this flesh I know I've been blessed Nothing can tear you from me Locked deep inside without a protest With me indefinitely.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/25/2009 8:58:00 PM
Beautiful. just simply beautiful
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Date: 12/25/2009 4:12:00 PM
Beautiful writing here, John !! The 5th stanza was like a balm for my heart ... smile ... strange how words from one can stand in for those never said by another ... guess thats why Hallmark cards are so popular ... LOL ... anyway, my friend your writing is an excellent selection to be featured this week here at the Soup! Congratulations!!
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Date: 12/22/2009 3:31:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes and much success in your writing endeavors. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/22/2009 3:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your remarkable poetry being featured this week John. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:31:00 PM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week. Happy Holidays! Caroline.
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week, Merry Christmas to you >> James
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:11:00 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week!! Very well deserved. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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