Perfect Brutal Lesson

To a broken anniversary
Of a love lost long ago
Filled with goose bumps and the memory
Of a soul I can't let go.

I wish I could remove the distance
That set both our poles apart
If I held a more delicate stance
I could have cradled your heart.

Despite my best intentions for us
The storm still swallowed me whole
Delicate plans were causing me fuss
I failed to honor my role.

No shame of our moment together
Though time has lessened the thrill
Our laughter will echo forever
Such gratitude fills me still.

If an instant of sorrow passed by
Without my loving embrace
Arrogance failed my perceptive eye
Complacency trumping grace.

Now I swim an ocean of regret
Without an island in sight
My mind traces back that silhouette
We shared within our delight.

Within this flesh I know I've been blessed
Nothing can tear you from me
Locked deep inside without a protest
With me indefinitely.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Fairchild Avatar
December 25, 2009 at 8:58 PM
Beautiful. just simply beautiful
Mason Avatar
December 25, 2009 at 4:12 PM
Beautiful writing here, John !! The 5th stanza was like a balm for my heart ... smile ... strange how words from one can stand in for those never said by another ... guess thats why Hallmark cards are so popular ... LOL ... anyway, my friend your writing is an excellent selection to be featured this week here at the Soup! Congratulations!!
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December 22, 2009 at 3:31 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes and much success in your writing endeavors. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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December 22, 2009 at 3:26 AM
Congratulations on your remarkable poetry being featured this week John. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 21, 2009 at 11:31 PM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week. Happy Holidays! Caroline.
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December 21, 2009 at 11:18 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week, Merry Christmas to you >> James
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December 21, 2009 at 11:11 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week!! Very well deserved. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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