Perfect

You liked the rain with me
you liked me
I felt it

I can't get over our love story
I tell it over and over
I'm still feelin it

and this feeling
is you and me 
sleeping
in a perfect "C"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Higgins Avatar
March 20, 2009 at 8:30 AM
Wonderful...love the perfect C..cool writing.
Devonshire Avatar
March 19, 2009 at 9:18 PM
Snuggling with you love in a perfect "C" sounds comfy, cozy, cuddly! Love this poem, Kimmy!
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