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Perennial Thorn

He embraces her~
         whispering love
                     but his dubious heart
         is perennial thorn
that pricks her bosom
over and over again.




01.15.2021

love hurtsrudefree verse

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Andrea Dietrich

January 18, 2021 at 10:49 AM

and ain't love grand? The emotion here VERY well expressed! Congrats on the list.

Harry Horsman

January 16, 2021 at 9:07 PM

Oh the cheater, love the deepest of the poem. JCB

Jan Allison

January 16, 2021 at 2:59 PM

Dropping back with my congrats :-) hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

January 16, 2021 at 1:48 PM

Once "pricked," she'd be well advised to avoid him. Who knows why some people stay with abusive spouses. Very compelling, JCB. And it appears congratulations are in order. Well done! Best wishes, Carolyn