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Perennial Charm

Break Of dawn Healing rays, Glinting verdure, Rumbling stream over the slimy hillocks. Perk up and life quickens with cozy warmth Sumptuous and Vernal charm Of sun God. Double Tetractys 3 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper Picture: 1 Syllable count: poetry soup Date: 28/09/2020 Placed : 3 rd

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Date: 10/7/2020 2:37:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go for the contest. Sara
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 10/7/2020 10:17:00 PM
Thanks a lot for the compliments.
Date: 10/2/2020 6:07:00 PM
Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Patri, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve"
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 10/3/2020 6:33:00 AM
Thanks a lot for the compliments.
Date: 10/2/2020 7:45:00 AM
- Beautiful poem, Patri :) - Congratulations on your third place in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 10/3/2020 6:33:00 AM
Thanks a lot for the compliments.
Date: 10/2/2020 6:20:00 AM
Every line visually stimulating-excellent Patri. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 10/3/2020 6:31:00 AM
Thanks a lot for the compliments.
Date: 10/1/2020 8:23:00 PM
Patri, your poem is absolutely stunning! Such stirring imagery, indeed, the charm of the sun God! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 10/3/2020 6:30:00 AM
Thanks a lot for the compliments.

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