Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Tetractys

Perennial Charm

Break 
                                             Of dawn
                                           Healing rays,
                                        Glinting verdure,
                         Rumbling stream over the slimy hillocks.
                        Perk up and life quickens with cozy warmth
                                        Sumptuous and 
                                          Vernal charm 
                                              Of sun
                                                God.


                             Double Tetractys 3 Poetry Contest
                             Sponsored by: Eve Roper 
                             Picture: 1
                             Syllable count: poetry soup
                             Date: 28/09/2020
                             Placed : 3 rd

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Sara Kendrick October 7, 2020 at 2:37 PM Congrats on your winning work. Way to go for the contest. Sara Patri Venkata Ramana October 7, 2020 at 10:17 PM Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Eve Roper October 2, 2020 at 6:07 PM Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Patri, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve" Patri Venkata Ramana October 3, 2020 at 6:33 AM Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2020 at 7:45 AM - Beautiful poem, Patri :) - Congratulations on your third place in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Patri Venkata Ramana October 3, 2020 at 6:33 AM Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Linda Alice Fowler October 2, 2020 at 6:20 AM Every line visually stimulating-excellent Patri. Congratulations on the win! Linda Patri Venkata Ramana October 3, 2020 at 6:31 AM Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Susan Ashley October 1, 2020 at 8:23 PM Patri, your poem is absolutely stunning! Such stirring imagery, indeed, the charm of the sun God! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Patri Venkata Ramana October 3, 2020 at 6:30 AM Thanks a lot for the compliments.