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Percolating

I always like it creamy, and a bit zestful On the pallet with robusta flavor--- Yet, totally unsweetened for now When daylight gulps in an ache; my coffee Becomes bitter, nipping my tongue Like heated grain of yesterday’s spiels--- Angry mouths percolating in the kitchen While she, in haste, rushes away. Contest of nette onclaud A Poem That Did Not Place and More New---Coffee/ 6 Sept 2015 Manny Paras

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Date: 9/19/2015 8:39:00 AM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/14/2015 1:28:00 PM
Manny, congrats on placing in Nette's awesome contest. SKAT
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Date: 9/14/2015 8:53:00 AM
"Angry mouths percolating in the kitchen" Damn...I love that line!
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Date: 9/14/2015 3:46:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Manny!
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Date: 9/14/2015 2:44:00 AM
i admire the use of taste in its most unique expression... thanks for joining my contest and congrats way to the top, manny!
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Date: 9/13/2015 11:42:00 AM
thanks for commenting on my work, manny.. huggs
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