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Perchance In Dreams

no hocus pocus reality feels bogus dreams zap our focus abstract besets real locus if for love then who woke us chosen now woken open sesame spoken deepest thought broken wilderness needs a token perhaps heaven’s unbroken cosmic hey presto one very hot potato slipped past dear plato consciousness found ratio fulcrums master, builds nato / \ / \ / \ By David Kavanagh Howmanysyllables 5/7/5/7/7 x 3 03/07/2022

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Date: 3/8/2022 8:31:00 AM
Interesting write! Wasn’t quite sure what Unseen Seeker was wanting here. I love: slipped past dear Plato.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/8/2022 8:46:00 AM
Thanks Kim To be honest I just went at it from the abstract, I haven’t got a clue if the Seeker or indeed many will get my intentions, I used the magic spells in real world terms, cheers David
Date: 3/7/2022 3:14:00 PM
Interesting Tanka, David. Great rhyming throughout. Bill
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/7/2022 3:28:00 PM
Heya Bill, this one probably makes more sense inside my head, than to most observers, but hey that’s the way most of us work, thank you for stopping by cheers David

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