Liz Labadie-Reilly Poet Rhyme

Perception of Heaven

Lush emerald hills crossed by rivers and streams,
where hues of nature shine vibrant and bright,
serene, blissful dwelling found only in dreams,
too exquisite for even the poet to write.



Perception of Heave of contest

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Mark Goodson April 4, 2012 at 6:14 AM Congratulations! A well written poem.

Andrea Dietrich March 30, 2012 at 7:16 AM I thought for sure I'd commented on this one before. BIg congrats to your splendid work.

March 28, 2012 at 8:44 PM Congratulations on taking first place in Carolyn's contest. A well deserving win with this beautiful write. Alexa

Sean Kelly March 27, 2012 at 9:39 AM Excellent piece , Liz and well deserved win .

Carol Sunshine Brown March 27, 2012 at 5:15 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn's contest Liz. Love, Carol

John Beam March 26, 2012 at 9:00 PM enjoyed reaidng and congrats on win win:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 26, 2012 at 7:22 PM congrats Liz on a first place win for a lovely entry of the great beyond..luv..

Sara Kendrick March 26, 2012 at 5:57 PM Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on your win...Sara

Gwendolen Song March 26, 2012 at 5:47 PM Dear Liz, This is one great rhyme!...Congrats on depicting heaven so heavenly! Gwendolen

Andrew Crisci March 26, 2012 at 5:44 PM My big congratulations to you, Liz for your fantastic win in Carolyn's contest. It's both delightful and impressive for its imagery and beauty. Enjoy your victory and may you have many more like this one! Peace and Love, Andrew.

Carolyn Devonshire March 26, 2012 at 4:43 PM Liz, I'm sending you a Soup mail. You have won a souvenir from Key West (I'll be fishing there in Mid-April). I'll need an address to send your prize. Please check your Soup mail. Love, Carolyn

Joann Grisetti March 26, 2012 at 4:27 PM Beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win in the contest.

David Williams March 26, 2012 at 3:55 PM Liz, congrats on your great win, I just love the short forms of poetry, very restricting, but you acheived here well done..David

Debbie Guzzi March 26, 2012 at 3:32 PM I really like how you ended it, it was not easy to get the concept of heaven in 4 lines was it! Congrad's on your winning write! Light & Love

Michael J. Falotico March 26, 2012 at 3:03 PM Liz this is a beautiful write... I would like to congrat you on a fine win and and amazing write.. will be looking into you work more... Luv Michael

Joyce Johnson March 26, 2012 at 2:31 PM Congratulations on your big win Liz. This is beautiful. Love, Joyce

Ralph Taylor March 26, 2012 at 1:32 PM Congrats on your well deserved 1st Place win, Liz. Excellent piece. Nice going. huggs, Ralph

Honestly J.T. March 26, 2012 at 1:24 PM Congrats on your 1st place win!- JH

Carolyn Devonshire March 26, 2012 at 12:22 PM Dear Liz, this is a remarkable standout in the contest. Indeed, heaven would be too beautiful even for poets to describe. Beautiful images throughout. Congratulations on taking first place! Love, Carolyn