Perceived Gaze Concord (Crystalline) (Edit)

Mystery discreetly disclosed.
Changing moods reveal details of shades
edit
Designed by nature with a clue,
Watchful minds eye, will break the venue.
edit
Blended aspiring deployment,
Thine story so brightly depicted.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Hickman Avatar
October 1, 2009 at 8:15 PM
Tyhank you all for reading and commenting and Thank You Brian for holding this contest,The story behind this piece I thought I woul let everyone know,,,,... I have Hazel eyes but they also change colors. from grenn to blue especially at special times. Thank You all again,,,Blessings >>cecil
Augustus Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 1:55 PM
Congratulations on your win in the Intervals contest!
Moreno Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 1:12 PM
Cecil, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
Richards Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 12:40 PM
Congratulations on this divine poem...so inspirational and serene! ~ Love, Carrie
 Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 10:19 AM
Interesting perspective for the reader to ponder about. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Karen
George   Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 7:11 AM
Dear Cecil, Congratulation on your well deserved win in Brian's contest. Love lainie
Brown Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 3:54 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Cecil. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 1:03 AM
Congrats on you success in my contest Cecil.Rgds Brian My latest contest Five&Twenty is now open
Rider Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 5:46 PM
I love the first line...it's almost seductive! Good luck with this experiment of Brians! Thank you also for your lovely comments. ~Trudy~
Brown Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 9:32 AM
Wishing you the best Cecil. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 11:53 PM
Thank you for supporting my experiment Cecil.Rgds Brian
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace