People Who Like Pain

Inspired by Black Country's Communion's "Sista Jane"


I wonder about people who like pain.
They self-berate and stress and worry so.
What is it that they think they’re going to gain?
They do too much and never take things slow.

Such people cannot face reality.
And some might use religion as the way
to get them through, but still they don’t feel free
if they live feeling guilty day to day.

Folks need to simply be more self-aware
and then accept themselves for who they are.
They need to feel some peace. They still can care,
but they don’t need to act the super star.

Faith they can keep, yet knowing what they need,
they can know joy – not bring themselves to bleed!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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August 23, 2023 at 6:58 PM
Hi Petal, Some folk just seem to be made that way. Great impressions in this piece. Take care, Richard
Poet Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 10:20 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea, you deserve it with this wonderful poem. Blessings dear friend
Hamilton Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 9:32 AM
Very interesting sonnet Andrea. I wonder too what do they get out of it? Maybe attention seeking or sympathy.
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 9:38 AM
I have pain but I certainly don't enjoy it. Haha. I have spent thousands of dollars seeking solutions. I think it's more about people who just fret and pile guilt on themselves. Seems a sad way to live
Xiang Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 8:36 AM
Thank you for your uplifting poem. I wish that I can someday come to your awareness and peace. I also wonder if Jesus was a bit of a masochist. He should be more like the Buddha who died from eating tainted pork.
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 9:36 AM
I hope you are not the kind of person I describe. But I do see movies about them and environment seems to play a big part
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