People Watching

It’s a Saturday night; all the lads are on the beer
Posing in their best clothes – look out ladies we are here
They swiftly down a pint then another three or four
Soon they are getting wobbly and falling to the floor

They stumble to the disco cos they are on the pull
Eying up the ladies, but their chat up lines are dull
The music is so loud you can’t hear a word they say
One thinks he’s hit the jackpot and he may get a lay

Now on ‘whiskey chasers’ getting egged on by their mates
Getting pretty paralytic – will anyone get dates
The girls aren’t impressed and tell them to go away
The lads will have to seek their date another day

They all stumble to the door and head for a greasy kebab
Desperately trying not to vomit when they are in the taxi cab
Home now at last to rest their throbbing aching head
Thank goodness its now Sunday they can spend all day in bed.

Jan Allison
8th April 2014

Went out to watch some live music a few weeks back .....
people watching – what a fascinating pastime!
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Lamoureux Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 8:36 AM
I agree, I spend many hours people watching. This was very entertaining. Some guys don't have a clue.
Allison Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 8:45 AM
So True Richard and sadly when the drink kicks in its both males and females who can end up making dreadful mistakes. thanks for the lovely comment Jan xxx
Walker  Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 12:47 AM
Well written Jan. Enjoyed the melodrama personification this poem gave... Verlena
Allison Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 12:51 AM
Thanks again Verlena for your lovely comments. Hugs Jan xxx
Ellison Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 4:56 PM
People watching can be a very entertaining sport no matter where you are! You describe a chaotic scene that is repeated over and over and over... us silly humans eh!!! LOL Like your style Miss Jan... big big hugs, Jake XOXOX
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 5:02 PM
Lovely to see you have got your sparkle back dear brother Jack Hugs Jan xxx
Watson Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 10:38 AM
You might have said hello instead of just watching me , lol Loved it Jan
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 11:11 AM
ooops sorry Darren I was too busy making notes for the poem. I will do next time! Hugs Jan xxx
Merrill Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 12:53 AM
Hi Jan, I'm the new kid in town, but making friends fast. Luv this poem. Unfortunately it is all too familiar--but amusing as well. And how skillfully you craft your verse with the all too rare couplet. It's a device I often use, so I really appreciate it. Drop by anytime, :) mel
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 1:38 AM
oops forgive me its MEL*
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 1:36 AM
Welcome to Soup Merrill - I too am relatively new - only joined in February but made some amazing friends and am growing in confidence every day. have fun in your writing and reading of other people's work - will drop straight by to see you. Hugs Jan x
Callus Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 3:34 PM
Watching people should serve as an eye-opener....not to repeat the stupidities that they commit, and becoming a laughing stock!! good humurous write Jan :)
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 3:39 PM
Thanks Paul for the lovely comment - written somewhat tongue in cheek but you do see it every weekend. Prefer to remain sober and safe myself. Hugs Jan x
Smith Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 1:07 PM
People watching is an event in itself. I volunteer at the Amphitheater in the concessions and have a great time watching everyone.
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 1:58 PM
Wow sounds awesome Tim. Thanks for dropping by, Hugs Jan xxxxxx
Austin Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 12:51 PM
Nothing more disgusting than a drunk lothario. Men will never learn. good stuff. Love, daver
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 1:57 PM
Thanks Daver - most fascinating watching lol hugs Jan x
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