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some or brother some or other thats has same ideals they sit a a meal and make deals some take long walk its PEOPLE TALK

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Date: 12/18/2011 1:18:00 PM
I love the last two lines! I think you should though change it to, Some are called brothers, Some are just others, They have the same ideals, And they sit at a meal, And still making deals, Some take the long walk, IT'S PEOPLE TALK! It's fantastic though! Tay, signing off!
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