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People On the Bus

Ladies sitting on a bus with nothing much to discuss Just the daughter’s wedding and the fuss As another passenger gets on the bus The sales are on “jeans and tops” she declares Now she really got a bargain there Idle chatter without any meaning While I sit on the bus idly dreaming The faces telling so many tales For the working man there are no cocktails There isn’t a stretch limo for the poor Or even a taxi that’s for sure People like the bus on a roundabout Accepting not protesting with a shout Being jostled and pushed by the crowd Like automatons nothing proud Accepting mediocrity like a shroud A pimply young youth out for a lark A man who for forty years has been a clerk Both chatting together looking at an advert Exciting young escorts for the convert A child tries to sneak on for free The driver on the lookout uniformed tyranny A cashier from Woolies, who’s name is Shirl Her companion trying to give her a whirl Two excited students chatting in Chinese As the driver says ‘Lady pay your fare please” The woman embarrassed shows her pension card That’s all she gets for working so hard On the production line in the factory at Pritchard The old drunk with sacred flask in pocket When emptied, his courage soars like a rocket The Greek on his way to his second job The giggling girl and her latest heart throb A constant blur of humanity filing in and out Never the rich or the ones with clout Just the deprived the old and the thrifty Over the years a sea of ever changing faces Heading for work, shopping, footie or the races Humanity squeezed into a fourteen ton carriage Jostled and bumped in a never ending marriage.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/29/2011 9:52:00 PM
wow, I just love how you capture the condition of the majority of the world, just mediocre and eking out a living. You are wonderful at story telling, Lizzie. Time to fave you if I haven't already!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/29/2011 8:20:00 PM
enjoyed the ride!! have not been much of a bus rider....but would like to maybe.
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Lizzie Treetop
Date: 11/29/2011 8:32:00 PM
In Australia the bus is an important means of transportation, we even have special busways. It cuts trips in peak hours way down. DARLING AMERICANS IN YOUR BEAUTIFUL CARS -Believe me I'll take a car over the bus anytime!
Date: 11/29/2011 4:45:00 PM
At least your interesting variety of riders make the trip worthwhile. The rich can be very dull sometimes but we who ride the bus are the salt of the earth. Quite a story Lizzy - u dun good!
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Date: 11/28/2011 9:18:00 PM
Drove buses a little while, see my wharfie poem, might bring a smile, went under a low bridge once, ventilation vents they just went crunch, trust you said the inspector:) at once...
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Date: 11/28/2011 8:45:00 PM
there were times when i had to catch the bus. and i saw these same views and thought of how the rich were robed of them. how we gathered in a warm place all together. and for a single space of time shared with the regulars our lives while they went home to silence. it was made that much better by the drunks that got on board. God bless you traveler. john
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Date: 11/28/2011 6:57:00 PM
Hi, Lizzie...I'm very intrigue by your mail... oi~ did you know you would never catch me on a bus... I'd rather hitchhike.. anyways.. about your poem: i can just imagine all of life's problem bottled in one 14 ton carriage... I am pleased to know gossip and heart break and laughter can all travel together.... enjoyed your poem... lol.. now go and dash my new haiku... i tried ..honestly i really did... enjoy..p.d.
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Lizzie Treetop
Date: 11/28/2011 7:42:00 PM
Stone the crows!!! Now I have aggravated all the poeple who do not ride on the bus!!!! Tell you this Poetry stuff is like treading on eggs! :) :) :)Darling I'll write a bike poem one day just for my lovely Linda!
Date: 11/28/2011 4:00:00 PM
I really liked this write :o) I felt like I was right there on the bus.Very nice..(o: Oh! And thank you for your lovely comments...So much appreciated...
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Date: 11/28/2011 6:39:00 AM
You see them the way I do. There is beauty in everyone. Except teenagers, no one wants to see that.
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