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People among us I traveled alone to see people I never meet Well beyond the usual places I get to visit Knowing instinctively I will learn something, There by the river I came upon stranded folks Thrilled in joy as their rescue boat arrived But it filled up quickly leaving them behind. The next town over, I stopped for a meal Where farms are filled with abundant yields As happy people meander and merrily live, Surprised, there I met souls awfully lonesome, Pained by hunger, looking despondent Mired in worries if they'll ever have enough. As I crossed into the streets of an urban city I found urgent hustle near towers of glitter Bustling with vigor of wealthy opulence, Among them were earners of meager wages Unable to pay for their routine needs Drowning in debts without a hint of relief. A sound of ambulance veered me to a hospital Where doctors and nurses performed miracles Caring for the injured and aging population, Among them were patients lacking health insurance Whose illness was draining their retirement funds As creditors' demands were driving them bankrupt. I returned home through a path of disaster Where entire communities have lost their homes Without any means of rebuilding abode, Among them were people who will soon confront Unthinkable prospects of living on the streets, With no place to go and nowhere to turn. December 8, 2017 People Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux Placed 4th

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Date: 5/6/2022 8:46:00 PM
Thus you met a medley of people from all walks of life, most of them facing crucial problems in life and some really happy people ! A slice of life where sorrow predominates over joy ! A beautiful poem, Vijay !
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Date: 12/18/2017 4:42:00 AM
So nicely written ... Congratulations on your win ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/18/2017 7:10:00 AM
Thank you Probir.
Date: 12/12/2017 2:41:00 PM
Very powerful, congratulations on your win Vijay. Best wishes, Mick
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/12/2017 4:01:00 PM
Thank you Mick.
Date: 12/12/2017 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/12/2017 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Rhoda.
Date: 12/12/2017 8:45:00 AM
Such vivid descriptons of different walks of life. I admire your writing skills!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/12/2017 9:34:00 AM
Thank you Becca--appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/12/2017 12:51:00 AM
Congrats on your great win, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/12/2017 5:40:00 AM
Thank you Subimal.
Date: 12/11/2017 9:25:00 PM
Vijay, your very moving poem reminds us of the violent extremes in this world. Excellent poem--CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/12/2017 5:40:00 AM
Thank you Janice.
Date: 12/11/2017 7:23:00 PM
Vijay, back to congratulate you on your win :) Hugs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/12/2017 5:39:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 12/11/2017 6:57:00 PM
A poignant and thought-provoking write! Congrats!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/12/2017 5:39:00 AM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 12/11/2017 6:29:00 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, congrats on your 4th place finish.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/12/2017 5:39:00 AM
Thank you Richard.
Date: 12/11/2017 4:45:00 AM
Vijay...described well many communities worldwide....here where I live, (Minnesota) safety nets are in place to assist those in need....food, healthcare, housing & job search if able, if not, cool, no worries...we do pay top ten highest state & local taxes tho....but, no children go hungry or homeless
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/11/2017 11:13:00 AM
Thank you James..appreciate the sentiments you expressed.
Date: 12/10/2017 11:55:00 PM
I guess there will always be that vast difference in this world Vijay, and you portray it so well in your wonderful lines. Good luck in the contest...Maria
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/11/2017 11:12:00 AM
Thank you Maria.
Date: 12/10/2017 9:41:00 PM
I love the write, Vijay, a winner already ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/11/2017 11:12:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 12/10/2017 6:35:00 AM
I liked your take on the contest, so many different kind of people in this world.. Life is not fair my friend, if only everyone was equally as happy..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/10/2017 6:51:00 AM
Appreciate your comments Silent One--many thanks.
Date: 12/10/2017 1:21:00 AM
Excellent. Well expressed write. Thanks for sharing it.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/10/2017 6:51:00 AM
Thank you Ravi--appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/9/2017 1:25:00 PM
- Great described between the differences, Vijay - The truth is painful - Best wishes in the contest - Happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/9/2017 3:44:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise--appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/9/2017 10:47:00 AM
Great poem Vijay! I especially love the 5th stanza! You pack a lot of emotions for all those people into this poem.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/9/2017 11:52:00 AM
Appreciate your comments, friend--many thanks.
Date: 12/9/2017 10:23:00 AM
A reality, no doubt...Well addressed in this poem...All the best Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/9/2017 11:51:00 AM
Many thanks Arturo.
Date: 12/9/2017 9:01:00 AM
A poet among us...well said, my friend...god bless and happy holidays Vijay...^WW^
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/9/2017 11:51:00 AM
Thank you WW--appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/9/2017 6:34:00 AM
..The government takes from the poor and gives to the rich...A sad truth
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/9/2017 7:11:00 AM
Thank you Joseph--appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/8/2017 8:59:00 PM
Wow. Sad truth here. Very emotional write. Should be a win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/9/2017 7:11:00 AM
Thank you Rhoda--appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/8/2017 6:25:00 PM
wow, Vijay, this is VERY good. It has quite an impact on this whole problem of inhumanity in the world today, with the rich getting richer and poor getting poorer. There was another contest recently I recall in which this one would have been very fitting.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/8/2017 8:13:00 PM
Thank you Andrea..you are right about the disparity in the world..appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/8/2017 4:24:00 PM
An age old story that never seems to change, best wishes in the contest Vijay...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/8/2017 8:12:00 PM
Thank you Charlie..appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/8/2017 3:48:00 PM
the beauty of life comes from different perspectives.. well done, vijay.. huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/8/2017 4:22:00 PM
Thank you nette..appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/8/2017 9:28:00 AM
Powerful truths inked, Vijay. Your intense eyes see beyond the materialistic veil. You are a true poet of note, in my humble opinion. Great poem! Love and joy always.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/8/2017 11:58:00 AM
Appreciate your comments..many thanks Freddie.
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