People Among Us

People among us I traveled alone to see people I never meet Well beyond the usual places I get to visit Knowing instinctively I will learn something, There by the river I came upon stranded folks Thrilled in joy as their rescue boat arrived But it filled up quickly leaving them behind. The next town over, I stopped for a meal Where farms are filled with abundant yields As happy people meander and merrily live, Surprised, there I met souls awfully lonesome, Pained by hunger, looking despondent Mired in worries if they'll ever have enough. As I crossed into the streets of an urban city I found urgent hustle near towers of glitter Bustling with vigor of wealthy opulence, Among them were earners of meager wages Unable to pay for their routine needs Drowning in debts without a hint of relief. A sound of ambulance veered me to a hospital Where doctors and nurses performed miracles Caring for the injured and aging population, Among them were patients lacking health insurance Whose illness was draining their retirement funds As creditors' demands were driving them bankrupt. I returned home through a path of disaster Where entire communities have lost their homes Without any means of rebuilding abode, Among them were people who will soon confront Unthinkable prospects of living on the streets, With no place to go and nowhere to turn. December 8, 2017 People Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux Placed 4th
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George Avatar
May 6, 2022 at 8:46 PM
Thus you met a medley of people from all walks of life, most of them facing crucial problems in life and some really happy people ! A slice of life where sorrow predominates over joy ! A beautiful poem, Vijay !
Gupta Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 4:42 AM
So nicely written ... Congratulations on your win ...
Pandit Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 7:10 AM
Thank you Probir.
Talbot Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 2:41 PM
Very powerful, congratulations on your win Vijay. Best wishes, Mick
Pandit Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 4:01 PM
Thank you Mick.
Tripp Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 1:14 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Pandit Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 1:41 PM
Thank you Rhoda.
Teagan Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Such vivid descriptons of different walks of life. I admire your writing skills!
Pandit Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 9:34 AM
Thank you Becca--appreciate your comments.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 12:51 AM
Congrats on your great win, Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 5:40 AM
Thank you Subimal.
Canerdy Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 9:25 PM
Vijay, your very moving poem reminds us of the violent extremes in this world. Excellent poem--CONGRATS on your win! Janice
Pandit Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 5:40 AM
Thank you Janice.
Roper Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 7:23 PM
Vijay, back to congratulate you on your win :) Hugs
Pandit Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 5:39 AM
Thank you Eve.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 6:57 PM
A poignant and thought-provoking write! Congrats!
Pandit Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 5:39 AM
Thank you Kim.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 6:29 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, congrats on your 4th place finish.
Pandit Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 5:39 AM
Thank you Richard.
Goff Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 4:45 AM
Vijay...described well many communities worldwide....here where I live, (Minnesota) safety nets are in place to assist those in need....food, healthcare, housing & job search if able, if not, cool, no worries...we do pay top ten highest state & local taxes tho....but, no children go hungry or homeless
Pandit Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 11:13 AM
Thank you James..appreciate the sentiments you expressed.
Williams Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 11:55 PM
I guess there will always be that vast difference in this world Vijay, and you portray it so well in your wonderful lines. Good luck in the contest...Maria
Pandit Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 11:12 AM
Thank you Maria.
Roper Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 9:41 PM
I love the write, Vijay, a winner already ...
Pandit Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 11:12 AM
Thank you Eve.
One Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 6:35 AM
I liked your take on the contest, so many different kind of people in this world.. Life is not fair my friend, if only everyone was equally as happy..
Pandit Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 6:51 AM
Appreciate your comments Silent One--many thanks.
Sathasivam Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 1:21 AM
Excellent. Well expressed write. Thanks for sharing it.
Pandit Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 6:51 AM
Thank you Ravi--appreciate your comments.
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 1:25 PM
- Great described between the differences, Vijay - The truth is painful - Best wishes in the contest - Happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 3:44 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise--appreciate your comments.
Swartz Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 10:47 AM
Great poem Vijay! I especially love the 5th stanza! You pack a lot of emotions for all those people into this poem.
Pandit Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 11:52 AM
Appreciate your comments, friend--many thanks.
Michael Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 10:23 AM
A reality, no doubt...Well addressed in this poem...All the best Vijay
Pandit Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Many thanks Arturo.
Warrior Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 9:01 AM
A poet among us...well said, my friend...god bless and happy holidays Vijay...^WW^
Pandit Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Thank you WW--appreciate your comments.
May Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 6:34 AM
..The government takes from the poor and gives to the rich...A sad truth
Pandit Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 7:11 AM
Thank you Joseph--appreciate your comments.
Tripp Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 8:59 PM
Wow. Sad truth here. Very emotional write. Should be a win.
Pandit Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 7:11 AM
Thank you Rhoda--appreciate your comments.
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 6:25 PM
wow, Vijay, this is VERY good. It has quite an impact on this whole problem of inhumanity in the world today, with the rich getting richer and poor getting poorer. There was another contest recently I recall in which this one would have been very fitting.
Pandit Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 8:13 PM
Thank you Andrea..you are right about the disparity in the world..appreciate your comments.
Smith Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 4:24 PM
An age old story that never seems to change, best wishes in the contest Vijay...
Pandit Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 8:12 PM
Thank you Charlie..appreciate your comments.
Onclaud Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 3:48 PM
the beauty of life comes from different perspectives.. well done, vijay.. huggs
Pandit Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 4:22 PM
Thank you nette..appreciate your comments.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 9:28 AM
Powerful truths inked, Vijay. Your intense eyes see beyond the materialistic veil. You are a true poet of note, in my humble opinion. Great poem! Love and joy always.
Pandit Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 11:58 AM
Appreciate your comments..many thanks Freddie.
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