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A peony symbolizes beauty, love and tranquility.

This exact color is in my flower garden and has been passed down through 3  generations. It is absolutely gorgeous… | Beautiful flowers, Pretty  flowers, Pink peonies

After, my mother died I had to sell her house, where she had a flower garden that she loved; so, I decided to transplant a peony, for her grave- this beauty was her most beloved ! I could just imagine this pink sumptuous flower, oh, I was full of fear that it would die; remembering, I planted it in the full sun, but, not a glimpse of a bud and I wanted to cry ! Under the winter snow the peony rested that year, then, to my sweet joy in the Spring- a bud; and with each visit the pinkish bud was growing, oh, thoughts of pink petals brought tears in a flood ! The ruffles are slowly unfurling in the sun, the divine blooming will soon take my breath away; did you know the peony can live 100 years, my happiness sings loud in this place of decay ! In the morning sun the peony burst open, in a fusion of pink fluff and magic; mom, now at your grave is tranquility, oh, that it only blooms in the Spring is tragic ! _________________ May 7, 2021 Poetry/Quatrain/Peony Copyright Protected, ID 05-1353-167-07 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Workshop: Inviting The Muse sponsor, Jack Webster, Judged 06/11/2021 Third Place

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Date: 6/21/2021 8:13:00 AM
Yes, it is a pity that they are not repeating blossoms for all to see all summer and fall. I enjoyed reading your winner. I planted some peonies but I planted just one first and it took it three years to get established. I did not know they could live 100 years though. Congrats on your winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 6/21/2021 12:33:00 PM
Sara, thank you for the visit, compliment and congrats, it happened to me at the cemetery the peony did not bloom and I thought it would not but it did and yes I read that they can live 100 years, and I think that is true for I have seen them at the cemetery on graves that no one has visited for years and years as all are gone, love _Constance
Date: 6/14/2021 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write and picture. I love this pretty flower with their ruffles. Enjoy your win with blessings...............
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Date: 6/14/2021 10:10:00 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment, love _Constance
Date: 6/11/2021 5:41:00 AM
'that it only blooms in the Spring is tragic' Yeah. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/11/2021 3:55:00 PM
Christuraj, thanks for the comment and congratulations, actually it only blooms for a few days, peace _Constance
Date: 5/8/2021 4:01:00 PM
Not so tragic...Thank God there's Spring...at least it blooms. Well done ...you kept the theme.
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Date: 5/9/2021 9:31:00 AM
Arturo, I think because it only blooms for such a short time is what makes it so magical, peace _Constance
Date: 5/8/2021 3:13:00 PM
You know...I didn't see the new one... it's not here.
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Date: 5/8/2021 3:51:00 PM
Arturo, this is it !!! peace _Constance
Date: 5/8/2021 8:24:00 AM
Lovely writing. I love it. God bless you always friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/8/2021 2:47:00 PM
Gina, thank you for the compliment, love _Constance
Date: 5/8/2021 1:17:00 AM
You outdid yourself on this gorgeous tribute poem about your mother's favorite flower Constance. You have created a masterpiece! What lover of flowers would not feel exalted in reading this boquet of words. Just stunning Constance! I am sure your mother knows what you did for her. I am faving this beauty! Blessings, Connie
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Date: 5/8/2021 2:47:00 PM
Connie, thank you for the compliment, and comment and of course the FAV, love _Constance
Date: 5/7/2021 12:26:00 PM
Keep going, Constance...Keep flowing
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Date: 5/7/2021 12:53:00 PM
Who's going anywhere...not me. Let me know in case I step out for coffee and missed it.
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Date: 5/7/2021 12:36:00 PM
Arturo, I am, hope you will come back later for the finale, peace _Constance
Date: 5/7/2021 11:39:00 AM
This is incredibly smart Constance, well done
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Date: 5/7/2021 11:42:00 AM
Lasaad, thank you, hope you come back when my poem is complete, peace _Constance

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