Notes About The Poem

My husband put up three blue bird houses to lure them away from the purple martin house. The "rest of the story" is told in the poem, "Fickle Lady."

Penthouse Apartment

Out in the open
on a very tall pole,
sunk into cement -
an expensive birdhouse,
designed for Purple Martins.

Mister Bluebird sits
atop the house,
guarding, watching,
while his lady works,
building her nest.

His presence causes
the Purple Martins
to pass on by, seeking
another place to build.

Twelve compartments,
eleven of them empty
except for wisps of straw 
placed in each, warning -

this house is taken!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bauer Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 8:45 PM
ha! poor purple martins! nice one...
Adams Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 9:03 PM
My husband bought the purple martin house for me as a birthday present. I thought it was so clever of the bluebird to put a piece of straw in each of the 11 other compartments so she could have the entire mansion for herself.
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