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My husband put up three blue bird houses to lure them away from the purple martin house. The "rest of the story" is told in the poem, "Fickle Lady."

Out in the open on a very tall pole, sunk into cement - an expensive birdhouse, designed for Purple Martins. Mister Bluebird sits atop the house, guarding, watching, while his lady works, building her nest. His presence causes the Purple Martins to pass on by, seeking another place to build. Twelve compartments, eleven of them empty except for wisps of straw placed in each, warning - this house is taken!

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Date: 11/12/2014 8:45:00 PM
ha! poor purple martins! nice one...
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Cona Adams
Date: 11/12/2014 9:03:00 PM
My husband bought the purple martin house for me as a birthday present. I thought it was so clever of the bluebird to put a piece of straw in each of the 11 other compartments so she could have the entire mansion for herself.

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