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When you left us I saw how the clouds parted, rent curtains, as you cleared earth’s drossy smear, and passed into a heaven bright beyond my wildest imagining. Bereft, fearful, we shut tight the door against wolves’ howling and waited for you to keep your promise. At first it was a whisper, the sea-ward wind prying loose our weak walls, but soon the song rose, until its power overwhelmed us with chords of faith, and, afire at last, we spoke!

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Date: 5/24/2015 2:21:00 PM
Steven.. this is a compelling spiritual write and a delight to read. I hope the rest of your Sunday is glorious!
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Date: 5/24/2015 10:15:00 AM
Amen, lovely poem for Pentecost today, I was healed today and set free, too long to explain but the spirit of the sovereign Lord I upon me Amen
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Date: 5/23/2015 7:32:00 PM
Beautiful lines that convey the conquest of the soul by the Spirit. Very smooth flow and profound message, it was a blessing to read.
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