Pentecost

When you left us
I saw how the clouds parted,
rent curtains,
as you cleared earth’s
drossy smear,
and passed into a heaven
bright beyond
my wildest imagining.
 
Bereft, fearful, we
shut tight the door
against wolves’ howling
and waited for you
to keep your promise.
 
At first it was a whisper,
the sea-ward wind
prying loose our
weak walls,
 
but soon the song rose, until
its power overwhelmed us
with chords of faith,
and, afire at last,
we spoke!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Christian Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 10:15 AM
Amen, lovely poem for Pentecost today, I was healed today and set free, too long to explain but the spirit of the sovereign Lord I upon me Amen
Buhain-Baello Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 7:32 PM
Beautiful lines that convey the conquest of the soul by the Spirit. Very smooth flow and profound message, it was a blessing to read.
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