Pens


Pens
Kill time;
Bleed out ink.
Through lines and curves,
With thoughts and crosses -
Shapes and ideas form,
Connections are made and shared,
Stories are allowed to grow tall
Paper and minds can be brightly filled
All because of eager pens killing time

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Tanis Troutman

Date: 8/5/2016 6:28:00 PM

I really enjoyed reading this. Well done and congrats

David Lindsay
Date: 8/6/2016 5:01:00 PM

Thanks :)

David Lindsay

Date: 7/29/2016 10:22:00 AM

Thanks everyone for the messages. Enjoyed the challenge of writing this one and delighted it got a placing :) Curious to know what people thought of the other etheree I wrote the same day called "Ace"

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/28/2016 4:32:00 AM

I love the way you've expressed writing.... Congrats David, for your well, deserved placement in the

David Lindsay
Date: 7/29/2016 10:17:00 AM

Thanks very much :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/27/2016 6:46:00 PM

David, congrats on your placement in my contest! I like how you personified pens and illustrated the progression of writing. Thank you for supporting my contest! Blessings!

David Lindsay
Date: 7/29/2016 10:19:00 AM

And thank you for placing me. I'll look out for your future contests and join in when I can. Always nice to try out a new format :)