Pens

Pens Kill time; Bleed out ink. Through lines and curves, With thoughts and crosses - Shapes and ideas form, Connections are made and shared, Stories are allowed to grow tall Paper and minds can be brightly filled All because of eager pens killing time

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Tanis Troutman

Date: 8/5/2016 6:28:00 PM

I really enjoyed reading this. Well done and congrats

David Lindsay
Date: 8/6/2016 5:01:00 PM

Thanks :)

David Lindsay

Date: 7/29/2016 10:22:00 AM

Thanks everyone for the messages. Enjoyed the challenge of writing this one and delighted it got a placing :) Curious to know what people thought of the other etheree I wrote the same day called "Ace"

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/28/2016 4:32:00 AM

I love the way you've expressed writing.... Congrats David, for your well, deserved placement in the

David Lindsay
Date: 7/29/2016 10:17:00 AM

Thanks very much :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/27/2016 6:46:00 PM

David, congrats on your placement in my contest! I like how you personified pens and illustrated the progression of writing. Thank you for supporting my contest! Blessings!

David Lindsay
Date: 7/29/2016 10:19:00 AM

And thank you for placing me. I'll look out for your future contests and join in when I can. Always nice to try out a new format :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/27/2016 3:03:00 PM

pens kill time great line David - am happy to keep 'killing time' until I can no longer hold that pen:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/27/2016 1:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your fifth placement David! ...A writer's life in a nutshell! 7 ; )

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/27/2016 12:03:00 AM

Great tribute to pen...fascinating imagination for your Ethereee, I enjoyed it. Congrats Sunita. :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/26/2016 11:57:00 PM

Brilliant win, superb etheree, David, well done! Regards, Viv

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/26/2016 10:42:00 PM

David, congratulations on your nice placement in the Etheree Premiere Contest. Pens are powerful! Love your theme! Sandra

Tom Arnone

Date: 7/26/2016 9:57:00 PM

I love that, "Pens Kill time; Bleed out ink." Congrats!

Lu Loo

Date: 7/26/2016 9:00:00 PM

David, congrats on your placement with this great etheree...be blessed :)-luloo