Penny Lane

Penny Lane

Penny Lane is more than just the last stop on the number 62 bus
Far removed from that of today
Where the children spit and cuss
The place tourists go to experience and kick up a fuss 
Penny Lane words depict a black and white portrait of history
A branch on every scouse family tree
That which mum and dad got to see
When they were teens 
Today viewing Penny Lane through the lens on a tourists bus
You sadly wont encounter any of this
It's very strange the way Liverpool changed
The old barber shop has been replaced by a supermarket chain
The banker opted for a foreign exchange
He now runs the New York stock exchange 
And Freddy the fireman who kept a picture in his pocket of the queen
Apparently batted for the opposing team 
He turned out such a scream
The only thing to the naked eye that appears to have stayed the same
Are the Beatles flying in the park under the cover of dark
And in typical fashion the English summer
Is still pouring rain
Its very strange
Something's never change
Here beneath Liverpool's decaying blue and red suburban sky
I was born and and shall die
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Radice Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 6:24 AM
Hi Christopher, I finally found this poem. It seems you beat me to Penny Lane in poetry by at least 10 years! :) Our ideas were similar..the now and then, the changing face, how tourist land is toytown compared to the reality, the dubious historical nature of the place name and the use of lines from the song. I'm glad I read this. Great write. Cheers - Gary
Flaherty Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 11:27 AM
Cheers Bud Just shows the great imagination of their bed of work. Because like you said the reality is so far removed
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations on your win Chris in Deborah Guzzi's contest " Summertime,Summertime, Sum, Sum, Summertime". Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 3:01 AM
Congrats on the win, Christopher
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 8:29 PM
congratulations on your HM, Christopher. Penny Lane is an interesting pop song as well as Teen Angel. LUv, Andrea
Johnson Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 8:03 PM
Great write. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 7:25 PM
Congrats Chris on your HM in Debbie's contest with this awesome song.. sweet rewrite.. perfect piece.. amazing win.. enjoy your sweet success and special honor my friend.. BEATLES forever..with luv from Italy.. caio..luv..
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August 15, 2010 at 7:09 PM
funny one...I wonder where the name liverpool came from...it brings to mind several graphic images.
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August 15, 2010 at 4:02 PM
Hello Chris, A very nice inspiration you have here. The classic is a very nice memory to bring us here at the soup.. The changes of time are a way we will always unite,,enjoyed,,p.d.
Neels Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 2:29 PM
Hey Chris, love this nostalgic write of yours, going down memory lane in this case Penny lane can be a great experience.. All the best for the contest, tc Wilma
Brown Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 4:22 PM
The very best to you in the contest Chris. Life changes oh my now doesn't it and not always for the good. Very well presented. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 1:58 PM
A great spinoff of the Beatles classic Penny Lane.. u incorporate all the sequences of the song to modern day times.. done very well. ... capturing it all Chrs.. enjoyed and thankxxx for pointing me to this piece.. with luv.. happy weekend...
Guzzi Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 10:05 PM
Okies Chris put *This poem was inspired by the song Teen Angel .........on the bottom of this poem ..hurry I'm ready to start judging. Light & Love
Bloomsfield Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 5:33 PM
Enjoyed reading you,Celene.
Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 1:40 PM
Interesting write about changes in your country as we all face changes where we have lived, loved, worked, and grown-up...Change is a fact of life I suppose..Enjoyed ..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 1:31 PM
Brilliant statement on the change in society over the years since Penny Lane was first released. We seem to be headed down the wrong road, don't we? And it's certainly no Penny Lane. More like Willie Nelson's "Blue Eyes Crying in the Rain." Terrific images of Liverpool in the '60s. Love, Carolyn
Guzzi Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 1:04 PM
Dear Chris..in order to be in my contest you must relate this write to one of the songs I posted and label it free verse form. Which of those songs on the contest page inspired you to write this poem?
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