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Penniless

The world eats money Stuff breaks when I have some spare I end penniless

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Date: 12/6/2022 12:08:00 PM
Does happen, still it is good to have any when you need some. Keep a penny jar…
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Date: 7/28/2020 8:56:00 PM
So true... A good poem
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 10/9/2020 9:03:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 7/28/2020 5:00:00 PM
so true!!!
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 10/9/2020 9:02:00 AM
Thank you for the visit
Date: 7/28/2020 4:59:00 PM
Yes, it does cost to live these days because everything is so high in price and sometimes it is a poor quality product as well. Great way to express the idea. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 10/9/2020 9:02:00 AM
Sara, I've never heard the end of it from my elders. It seems I was born in a time too late for quality made products. Thanks for the visit!
Date: 11/26/2019 1:52:00 PM
Jesse: You might say : " In a word, Truth" Thanks for sharing with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 3/9/2020 10:36:00 PM
Thanks, Buck
Date: 7/9/2018 1:06:00 PM
I like poems that keeps me thinking Good one my friend
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 3/9/2020 10:36:00 PM
thank you
Date: 7/7/2018 6:33:00 PM
Great to have had your recent visit Jesse. Things are getting better, slowly but surely. Right - it must for Jesus declared on the Cross: "It is finished." He did the work, the heavy-lifting for us. I try to list the blessings I'm grateful for, in hard times especially, then it looks brighter. Shalom, shalom dear friend. amen
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Date: 5/22/2018 8:15:00 AM
Jesse, shalom shalom with His power to free us from all cirs]cunstances. I read - quietly - some of the poems of struggles, mostly financial. I hesitated to say empty words of support (even as I am praying for your BREAKthrough in His Love) amen
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 7/6/2018 7:20:00 PM
Shalom Anil, it is good to hear your thoughts.
Date: 3/24/2018 9:31:00 AM
Great poem, money is a much desired and disappearing element.
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 7/6/2018 7:20:00 PM
Thank you for your read, John.
Date: 3/20/2018 10:34:00 PM
Don't most we all. Well most! Lol! Nice one Jesse... Hugs :)
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 3/21/2018 11:41:00 PM
thanks, Akkina, glad you liked it. Hugs.
Date: 3/12/2018 11:32:00 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N7ZjYbP6X8Y
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 3/12/2018 11:57:00 AM
I tried to go to that, it wouldn't let me. not sure what it's about.
Date: 2/20/2018 7:17:00 AM
Yes--that is how it all gets spent..astute observation.
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 3/12/2018 11:57:00 AM
It's just funny to me. When I'm poor I don't have much that goes wrong but it's like the moment I get money in my hands the Well Pump goes "um, hey buddy... I"m going to break okay?"

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