Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Penned Satisfaction

Every time he picks up 
his pen and ink 
He is writing just for 
me I like to think 
This white paper is 
our own satin sheet 
His purpose is evident a 
certain challenging feat 
Each word elegantly 
swirls with intent 
Sentences coming together 
being all heaven sent 
Ink flows over my bare 
flesh and each curve 
Leaving me breathless 
losing control and reserve 
As his pen scrapes the 
paper it sends such chills 
Every period and question 
mark ends new thrills 
More passionately he writes 
the deeper each pens stroke 
Raising the excitement in 
me teasingly provokes 
Faster his pen artfully 
brings on a reaction 
When his pen releases its ink 
in flesh tingling satisfaction

1st place
Strand Special 11 contest
Sponsor; Brian strand

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Pratap Roy January 5, 2020 at 10:44 PM Congrats.... So nicely written. Loved the flow. God bless you. Brenda Chiri January 6, 2020 at 1:53 AM Thank you !;)

Caren Krutsinger December 31, 2019 at 1:08 PM It is wonderful; I can see where it could win all of the contests, not just one. Brenda Chiri December 31, 2019 at 5:25 PM Ahh my county friend! Thank you for all the support you have given me!;)

John Fleming December 30, 2019 at 8:42 AM This really is very good, Brenda...W.B. Yeats would have nominated you for his exclusive "Rhymers Club" on this showing. Excellent example of original and creative poetry -- very well done you! P.s Ernest Dowson would have been a big fan of your poetry I think...he always was a bit on the decadent side. ;) Brenda Chiri December 31, 2019 at 5:25 PM Thank you so much John!;) happy New Years!;)

Juliet Ligon December 29, 2019 at 10:32 PM Sounds lovely. Congrats! Brenda Chiri December 30, 2019 at 5:40 AM Thank you Juliet!;)

L. J. Carber December 29, 2019 at 5:43 PM Lovely, Brenda--congrats! [there's a small typo in next to last line--should be 'its' instead of 'it's'-- recently caught one in one of my own poems that had been online for some time--Soupers should really tell each other when we see them.] Brenda Chiri December 29, 2019 at 5:56 PM I appreciate that so much thank you! And thanks for the read!;)

Sandra Adams December 29, 2019 at 5:04 PM wonderfully penned Brenda... congratulations on your top win :) hugs Brenda Chiri December 29, 2019 at 5:55 PM Thanks sandy but yours was a top win too my friend!;)

Gary Smith December 29, 2019 at 4:31 PM Excellent poetry Brenda, congrats. :) Brenda Chiri December 29, 2019 at 5:55 PM Thank you so much Gary!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script December 28, 2019 at 6:03 AM Wow, beautifully written!!! You had me since the very first line all the way to the end. Crossing my fingers that this is a winner!! Lol Brenda Chiri December 29, 2019 at 4:12 PM Well I hope so but if not it was fun writing!;( thanks so much G!;)

Caren Krutsinger December 27, 2019 at 11:56 PM I will have to shower after this one, I fear. Brenda Chiri December 28, 2019 at 1:55 AM Haha Caren thank you my dear friend!;)

Geoffrey Brewer December 27, 2019 at 9:54 PM Sensational sensuality sensitively scribed with finesse - Phew! Brenda. Brenda Chiri December 28, 2019 at 1:55 AM Geoffrey thank you so much!;)

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2019 at 9:08 PM what a great analogy this makes, Brenda. Wow, love this. Brenda Chiri December 28, 2019 at 1:55 AM Andrea I do like having that wow factor thank you!;)

Janice Canerdy December 27, 2019 at 9:35 AM GREAT poem, so romantic, with stunningly awesome imagery, Brenda! Janice Brenda Chiri December 28, 2019 at 1:54 AM Janice thank you so much!;)

Pashang Salehi December 26, 2019 at 6:32 AM What a beautiful piece... happy holidays. Brenda Chiri December 28, 2019 at 1:54 AM Pashang thank you so very much!;)

Beata Agustin December 25, 2019 at 11:17 PM Wow! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones. Brenda Chiri December 28, 2019 at 1:53 AM Beata thank you so much for that wow!;) your too kind!

John Hamilton December 25, 2019 at 10:29 AM A wondrous write Brenda, so well done...enjoyed immensely! Brenda Chiri December 25, 2019 at 11:36 AM John thank yo so very much!;)

Beautiful Scars December 25, 2019 at 9:07 AM wow amazing poem. Great rhythm and rhyme as always! Merry Christmas again! x:-)-luloo Brenda Chiri December 25, 2019 at 11:36 AM Thank you Laura I appreciate your opinion on my work so much!;)

John Gondolf December 25, 2019 at 6:58 AM Bren, this sensual piece was so captivating and stimulating, you do these so well. Thank you for sharing. Hugs, John Brenda Chiri December 25, 2019 at 8:31 AM Haha thank you so very much John!;)

Quoth Theraven December 24, 2019 at 9:02 PM Merry Christmas Brenda. -Richard Brenda Chiri December 24, 2019 at 9:08 PM Merry Christmas Richard!;)

Gershon Wolf December 24, 2019 at 8:30 PM Bravo! As thrilling to read as it is to contemplate. Thank you, Gershon Gershon Wolf December 29, 2019 at 9:35 PM Back with congrats on your very deserving first place finish, Brenda! Happy 20201 ~ Gershon Brenda Chiri December 24, 2019 at 9:08 PM Ha thank you so much Gershon! You are too kind!;)

Eve Roper December 24, 2019 at 8:24 PM wow a very passionate write, I like the use of his pen and you are the white piece of paper... nicely done.. Merry Christmas Brenda Chiri December 24, 2019 at 9:07 PM Wow thank you Eve so very much!;)