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Penned Satisfaction

Every time he picks up 
his pen and ink 
He is writing just for 
me I like to think 
This white paper is 
our own satin sheet 
His purpose is evident a 
certain challenging feat 
Each word elegantly 
swirls with intent 
Sentences coming together 
being all heaven sent 
Ink flows over my bare 
flesh and each curve 
Leaving me breathless 
losing control and reserve 
As his pen scrapes the 
paper it sends such chills 
Every period and question 
mark ends new thrills 
More passionately he writes 
the deeper each pens stroke 
Raising the excitement in 
me teasingly provokes 
Faster his pen artfully 
brings on a reaction 
When his pen releases its ink 
in flesh tingling satisfaction

1st place
Strand Special 11 contest
Sponsor; Brian strand

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Pratap Roy Date: 1/5/2020 10:44:00 PM Congrats.... So nicely written. Loved the flow. God bless you. Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 1/6/2020 1:53:00 AM Thank you !;)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 12/31/2019 1:08:00 PM It is wonderful; I can see where it could win all of the contests, not just one. Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 12/31/2019 5:25:00 PM Ahh my county friend! Thank you for all the support you have given me!;)

John Fleming Date: 12/30/2019 8:42:00 AM This really is very good, Brenda...W.B. Yeats would have nominated you for his exclusive "Rhymers Club" on this showing. Excellent example of original and creative poetry -- very well done you! P.s Ernest Dowson would have been a big fan of your poetry I think...he always was a bit on the decadent side. ;) Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 12/31/2019 5:25:00 PM Thank you so much John!;) happy New Years!;)

Juliet Ligon Date: 12/29/2019 10:32:00 PM Sounds lovely. Congrats! Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 12/30/2019 5:40:00 AM Thank you Juliet!;)

L. J. Carber Date: 12/29/2019 5:43:00 PM Lovely, Brenda--congrats! [there's a small typo in next to last line--should be 'its' instead of 'it's'-- recently caught one in one of my own poems that had been online for some time--Soupers should really tell each other when we see them.] Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 12/29/2019 5:56:00 PM I appreciate that so much thank you! And thanks for the read!;)

Sandra Adams Date: 12/29/2019 5:04:00 PM wonderfully penned Brenda... congratulations on your top win :) hugs Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 12/29/2019 5:55:00 PM Thanks sandy but yours was a top win too my friend!;)

Gary Smith Date: 12/29/2019 4:31:00 PM Excellent poetry Brenda, congrats. :) Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 12/29/2019 5:55:00 PM Thank you so much Gary!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 12/28/2019 6:03:00 AM Wow, beautifully written!!! You had me since the very first line all the way to the end. Crossing my fingers that this is a winner!! Lol Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 12/29/2019 4:12:00 PM Well I hope so but if not it was fun writing!;( thanks so much G!;)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 12/27/2019 11:56:00 PM I will have to shower after this one, I fear. Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 12/28/2019 1:55:00 AM Haha Caren thank you my dear friend!;)

Geoffrey Brewer Date: 12/27/2019 9:54:00 PM Sensational sensuality sensitively scribed with finesse - Phew! Brenda. Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 12/28/2019 1:55:00 AM Geoffrey thank you so much!;)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/27/2019 9:08:00 PM what a great analogy this makes, Brenda. Wow, love this. Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 12/28/2019 1:55:00 AM Andrea I do like having that wow factor thank you!;)

Janice Canerdy Date: 12/27/2019 9:35:00 AM GREAT poem, so romantic, with stunningly awesome imagery, Brenda! Janice Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 12/28/2019 1:54:00 AM Janice thank you so much!;)

Pashang Salehi Date: 12/26/2019 6:32:00 AM What a beautiful piece... happy holidays. Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 12/28/2019 1:54:00 AM Pashang thank you so very much!;)

Beata Agustin Date: 12/25/2019 11:17:00 PM Wow! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones. Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 12/28/2019 1:53:00 AM Beata thank you so much for that wow!;) your too kind!

John Hamilton Date: 12/25/2019 10:29:00 AM A wondrous write Brenda, so well done...enjoyed immensely! Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 12/25/2019 11:36:00 AM John thank yo so very much!;)

Beautiful Scars Date: 12/25/2019 9:07:00 AM wow amazing poem. Great rhythm and rhyme as always! Merry Christmas again! x:-)-luloo Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 12/25/2019 11:36:00 AM Thank you Laura I appreciate your opinion on my work so much!;)

John Gondolf Date: 12/25/2019 6:58:00 AM Bren, this sensual piece was so captivating and stimulating, you do these so well. Thank you for sharing. Hugs, John Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 12/25/2019 8:31:00 AM Haha thank you so very much John!;)

Quoth Theraven Date: 12/24/2019 9:02:00 PM Merry Christmas Brenda. -Richard Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 12/24/2019 9:08:00 PM Merry Christmas Richard!;)

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/24/2019 8:30:00 PM Bravo! As thrilling to read as it is to contemplate. Thank you, Gershon Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 12/29/2019 9:35:00 PM Back with congrats on your very deserving first place finish, Brenda! Happy 20201 ~ Gershon Brenda Chiri Date: 12/24/2019 9:08:00 PM Ha thank you so much Gershon! You are too kind!;)

Eve Roper Date: 12/24/2019 8:24:00 PM wow a very passionate write, I like the use of his pen and you are the white piece of paper... nicely done.. Merry Christmas Login to Reply Brenda Chiri Date: 12/24/2019 9:07:00 PM Wow thank you Eve so very much!;)