Peningitis

It seems an electrical short created a monster of sorts, but I’m a believer that very high fever turned word play into my best sport.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/7/2023 11:05:00 PM

Love the last two lines; you are delightfully delirious sometimes when you dip your pen into the ink!

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/7/2023 2:06:00 PM

A master craftsman, but certainly no monster Jeff, a very clever and (humerus) limerick, cheers David

Jeff Kyser
Date: 1/7/2023 2:12:00 PM

Thanks for the read and the comments, David!

Constance La France

Date: 1/7/2023 6:45:00 AM

Jeff, fun and clever limerick, well done, Constance

Jeff Kyser
Date: 1/7/2023 2:12:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it, Constance!

Jenna Logan

Date: 1/7/2023 4:53:00 AM

If your word play is caused by a fever, it's better than any muse I've read about. You're a very clever poet, Jeff.

Jeff Kyser
Date: 1/7/2023 5:35:00 AM

Ha, thanks, Jenna - good to see you back in the saddle (or saloon, whichever it is :-)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/7/2023 4:39:00 AM

Love the title!