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Peeling An Onion

There is a truth in you my friend both heady and unique that makes my sense of smell take flight, and drives my curiosity. I carve away voraciously, cut deep and cut again til glossy bulb is ringed layers of dazzling luminosity. Sweet orbed bands, I plate them out, in artful presentation gleaming rings I praise, admire the aim of my pomposity I peel, and peel,and peel again core’s perfect pearl revealed And I in awe, Relish, delight devour you aromally

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Date: 10/17/2014 1:23:00 PM
Interested thoughts in poetic verses, Gail! Enjoyed! :) love & light! xxxx D.
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Gail Roberts
Date: 10/17/2014 2:04:00 PM
Thank you, Dorian. I still have no idea what I'm doing but it feels good to set my thoughts to paper. . .good or bad. . .

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