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July 27, 2024      10.57am

Peeks How Deep



A boy who can’t swim named Ted,
Checks the pool, dipping his head,
He says, “Pool is deep.”
Bubbles from his lips,
His friend cries, “Ted is now dead!”
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 10:40 AM
WOW!!! Way toooooooo cute. I can see it all before me. Guess no more pool for Ted. Hahaha!!!  Hugs... Have a/fun day........
Gasun Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 9:22 PM
Thank you so much again belatedly for reading this poem of mine and your uplifting and delightful comments my dearest poet friend Paula. ha ha ha. Have a fun day too! Hugs
Kendrick Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 1:55 AM
Whoa!! Poor Ted. Sara K
Gasun Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 9:20 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your funny comment my dearest poet friend Sara. God bless you always and your writngs. Hugs
Croft Avatar
July 28, 2024 at 9:15 PM
I did not see that coming. Very nice limerick.
Gasun Avatar
July 28, 2024 at 11:23 PM
Thanks a lot my dear poet friend Karen. Blessings to you alwys and your writings. Have a wonderful new week! Hugs
Empress Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 12:31 PM
Oh my! What a take on the prompt dear len, kids always are such fun and come up with funny conclusions. Cute! Hope you are doing well and its a pleasure reading your work, sending you light, best wishes always
Gasun Avatar
July 28, 2024 at 6:00 PM
You're right my dear poet friend Ink. Sometimes their conclusions are funny. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comments and also your loving support. Blessings to you always and your writings, Hugs
mysore Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 9:47 PM
funny it is dear poet. Happy writing.
Gasun Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 10:07 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your insightful comment my dear poet friend. Happy writing too. God bless you always Hugs
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