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Peeks How Deep

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July 27, 2024 10.57am

A boy who can’t swim named Ted, Checks the pool, dipping his head, He says, “Pool is deep.” Bubbles from his lips, His friend cries, “Ted is now dead!”

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/30/2024 10:40:00 AM

WOW!!! Way toooooooo cute. I can see it all before me. Guess no more pool for Ted. Hahaha!!! Hugs... Have a/fun day........

Len Gasun
Date: 8/17/2024 9:22:00 PM

Thank you so much again belatedly for reading this poem of mine and your uplifting and delightful comments my dearest poet friend Paula. ha ha ha. Have a fun day too! Hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/29/2024 1:55:00 AM

Whoa!! Poor Ted. Sara K

Len Gasun
Date: 8/17/2024 9:20:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your funny comment my dearest poet friend Sara. God bless you always and your writngs. Hugs

Karen Croft

Date: 7/28/2024 9:15:00 PM

I did not see that coming. Very nice limerick.

Len Gasun
Date: 7/28/2024 11:23:00 PM

Thanks a lot my dear poet friend Karen. Blessings to you alwys and your writings. Have a wonderful new week! Hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 7/27/2024 12:31:00 PM

Oh my! What a take on the prompt dear len, kids always are such fun and come up with funny conclusions. Cute! Hope you are doing well and its a pleasure reading your work, sending you light, best wishes always

Len Gasun
Date: 7/28/2024 6:00:00 PM

You're right my dear poet friend Ink. Sometimes their conclusions are funny. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comments and also your loving support. Blessings to you always and your writings, Hugs

Tom Woody

Date: 7/27/2024 5:32:00 AM

Well, that's a rather macabre take on the theme. Fosho

Len Gasun
Date: 7/28/2024 5:51:00 PM

It depends on how a reader look at the image of my woven words my dear poet friend. You might be right too. Like life, it depends on how we perceive it. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your insightful comments. I'm so delighted. Blessings to you and your writings. Hugs

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/26/2024 9:47:00 PM

funny it is dear poet. Happy writing.

Len Gasun
Date: 7/26/2024 10:07:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your insightful comment my dear poet friend. Happy writing too. God bless you always Hugs