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This is my first haiku. I hope it is correct!.You must keep in mind, this is a sexy-ku.

Peekaboo Sexyku

Staring at the moon
An intoxicating view
A slice of heaven

by Daniel Turner

Copyright © Daniel Turner | Year Posted 2017

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April 14, 2017 at 1:37 PM

Indeed, some nights moon is a great companion.....

Eileen Manassian

March 9, 2017 at 8:39 PM

OH DEAR!!! I also had to read the comments to get this...and now...dear dear. :)

March 5, 2017 at 7:23 PM

Well!! I didn't realize what this was really about until I read some of the comments. I was wondering why the title was "...Sexyku". Now I know. lol Good sexyku haiku.

February 28, 2017 at 9:11 AM

so much said, so few words

February 27, 2017 at 9:40 AM

LOL! The view of God so wonderful, so graciously given. Nice mixed haiku

February 26, 2017 at 6:50 PM

I'm going to re-ask my question about the moon to you now :)

February 26, 2017 at 7:56 PM

Ohhh. I see. Thank you for clearing it up, DT

February 26, 2017 at 7:43 PM

See answer on original question:) It all depends on the poem.

February 26, 2017 at 11:11 AM

Nicely symbolical ... A7 ...

February 26, 2017 at 4:02 PM

Thank you, Probir:)

Pandita Sietesantos

February 24, 2017 at 11:08 AM

Such a lovely sexyku! I can't believe that this is your first haiku! You have already mastered this form! A-7 and good luck in the contest! Hugs. Pandita

February 25, 2017 at 7:52 AM

You're just too sweet:) Thank you so much, Pandita.

February 23, 2017 at 1:35 PM

You did really well for a first haiku, Danny! A mooning sexyku! ~ Regards // paul

February 25, 2017 at 7:51 AM

Thank you, Paul. I changed it a hundred times. I couldn't figure out which sounded better. I kept swapping the first and last lines.

February 23, 2017 at 1:18 PM

Nice moon :D

February 25, 2017 at 7:49 AM

Thank you, Darren:)

Charlotte Puddifoot

February 22, 2017 at 7:52 AM

lol good first haiku; a little dash (cut) after the 2nd line will work wonders - good luck in the contest, and thanks for your comment on my work

February 25, 2017 at 7:49 AM

Thank you, Charlotte:)

Andrea Dietrich

February 22, 2017 at 1:00 AM

I see. hahaha

February 25, 2017 at 7:46 AM

Thank you, again, Andrea:)

February 21, 2017 at 7:37 PM

You dirty old man, good stuff DT...

February 25, 2017 at 7:45 AM

I guess my secret's out:) Thank you Charlie.

Andrea Dietrich

February 21, 2017 at 3:34 PM

this is wonderful. I sure am enjoying the sexyku!!

February 21, 2017 at 5:04 PM

Thank you, Andrea. This is my first haiku:)

February 21, 2017 at 8:17 AM

What a moon to view ... a creation of beauty ...

February 21, 2017 at 5:02 PM

Absolutely! Thank you, Probir:)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

February 21, 2017 at 12:07 AM

Oh, I love the sexy view of the moon, Daniel... well done! I was trying to write a 'sexyku' but I guess I wasn't in a sexy mood today. I think I'll miss this one. Lots of luck in the contest! Hugs, Rhonda

February 21, 2017 at 5:02 PM

Thank you, Rhonda and I'm sure you'll come up with something:)

February 20, 2017 at 9:03 PM

Your a mad moon man Daniel...and your first haiku is awesome...god bless...^WW^

February 21, 2017 at 5:01 PM

Thank you, Wingman:)

February 20, 2017 at 5:57 PM

Sure can get lost in thoughts staring at the moon :)

February 20, 2017 at 6:02 PM

You said it:) Thank you, Kina:) But for me it's just one thought. Lol

February 20, 2017 at 4:18 PM

nice one, daniel! i love to gaze at the moon, especially when it's a crescent...

February 20, 2017 at 4:27 PM

You're looking from the wrong angle. It;s supposed to be a little dirty/sexy. Thank you, Mrs Ilene:)

February 20, 2017 at 4:01 PM

a moment of peace through the chaos. a lovely haiku. blessings, lynn

February 20, 2017 at 4:28 PM

It's supposed to be a little dirty/sexy. Think men looking at women:) Thank you, Lynn Marie:)

February 20, 2017 at 3:10 PM

Great imagery, great first haiku, they're hard, trying to say a lot in a few words, but you nailed it.

February 20, 2017 at 4:28 PM

Thank you, John. I thought perhaps you might get the play on words:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 20, 2017 at 2:36 PM

- A very sweet haiku, Daniel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

February 20, 2017 at 4:29 PM

Thank you, Anne Lise. I believe you're thinking about the wrong moon:)

February 20, 2017 at 1:55 PM

A slice of heaven

February 21, 2017 at 8:01 PM

Lol

February 20, 2017 at 1:57 PM

That's what I had at first but changed it. Now I"ve changed it back. Thanks Tim:)

February 20, 2017 at 1:35 PM

Moon playing peekaboo I love the imagery Daniel - a great first haiku:-) hugs jan xx

February 20, 2017 at 1:58 PM

Thank you, Jan. I owe it all to you, sorta:)

February 20, 2017 at 1:25 PM

Beautiful and romantic <3 love it ... good luck in the contest Hugs sweet friend

February 20, 2017 at 1:58 PM

Thank you, Mrs Eve:)

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