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Oh yes, I see you, the Doc let me peek for so long you were blurred no more than a little gray wiggly blob Daddy would say boo to [as if you could hear him?] saying "boo". Maybe you did hear because out you came a bit early! Dad was there again to peek. Sorry about the light being so bright, a bit scary. You started boo hooing, boo, but you were gorgeous, still, at first peek. So, of course your first game was peek a boo! TRITINA see about the poem 7/22/14

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Date: 8/4/2014 4:21:00 PM
Grats on your win :) wonderful :)
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Date: 8/4/2014 8:44:00 AM
This is so sweet, congratulations.
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Date: 8/4/2014 7:57:00 AM
A fabulous take Debbie n a lovely write,, congrats on huge win!
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Date: 8/3/2014 7:33:00 AM
Ha, peek a boo, that was fun....congratulations Debbie. A sport, first game it was. I'm thinking. Linda
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Date: 8/3/2014 4:50:00 AM
nice peek a boo win for the little one, Debbie.
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Date: 8/2/2014 11:26:00 PM
A fine write and great win, Congrats!
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Date: 8/2/2014 8:42:00 PM
hey, Congratulations. I am eager to see your notes, but i just can't seem to find them by clicking on various things.Can you tell me how? WAs that you in the picture? And one more thing. Did you ever get all the stuff I sent to you about your blank verse . I sent it to the address I had from a forward that you sent to my hotmail.
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Date: 8/2/2014 3:21:00 PM
Lovely and pleasant take on the baby theme, Debbie! Congrats on your fine win.// paul
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Date: 8/2/2014 2:39:00 PM
the baby coos and talks.. nice one , Debbie... big congrats..huggs
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Date: 8/2/2014 12:46:00 PM
This is a charmer, Debbie, as I am sure the little one is. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/29/2014 12:48:00 PM
Hmmm...where is the 'about the poem'? You know, this made me think of when my son was born. He just wouldn't come out! Part of his head would pop out and then would suck right back in...ha. He was a big boy...bout 9lbs. Ended up having to have a C-section. Peek A BOO!
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Date: 7/24/2014 2:52:00 PM
well done Debbie, glad I read Andrea's reply about the last line, it allowed me to change mine...good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/24/2014 5:32:00 AM
I am not familiar with this form, but I love the poem it is so creative and just sweet. Thank you for your visit to my poem and wonderful comments.
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Date: 7/23/2014 4:54:00 PM
Very clever use of the tritina, and it fit the theme perfectly! Good luck! Just saw a possible typo. Check line 9, you vs your. Cheers, Roy
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 7/23/2014 10:31:00 PM
thanks Roy!
Date: 7/23/2014 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations, mamma. Love, daver
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Date: 7/23/2014 9:41:00 AM
Peek a boo Sweet lady..An adorable Tritina..
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Date: 7/22/2014 8:12:00 PM
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Date: 7/22/2014 8:10:00 PM
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Date: 7/22/2014 5:51:00 PM
I really like yours, Debs. It's different, out of the box. One thing though, I did not understand the function of "a" in your last stanza / line one. by the way, Craig and I discussed this form and he realized that I was right about it. The Tritina does not make you use your three words side by side at the end of the final phrase. I did not do mine that way, and I hope others can realize it is not necessary.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 7/22/2014 7:44:00 PM
good catch Andie thanks I'll fix it!
Date: 7/22/2014 5:51:00 PM
We can't see about the poems anymore?
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Date: 7/22/2014 5:38:00 PM
charming write Debbie - there is no about this poem link as far as i can see it seems to have disappeared! Hugs Jan x
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