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Pedestal of Flowers

As the flower grows, The honeybee lands atop; Resting on beauty.

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Steve Edmonds

Date: 3/29/2009 9:57:00 AM

A lovely image, you did it justice. It's almost time to see the real deal.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 3/27/2009 10:16:00 PM

You delivery at paining a picture with words is superb. Love Elizabeth

Date: 3/27/2009 9:41:00 AM

Nice use of imagery for an uplifting poem. The scene has me smiling and gives one hope that spring will eventually come. Thank you for your kind comment on my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen

Daniel Neal

Date: 3/27/2009 3:17:00 AM

Enjoyed this lovely haku evoking spring so well. DN

Tyler Martin

Date: 3/27/2009 3:01:00 AM

Serene write, plentiful with imagery. Tyler

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 3/26/2009 12:45:00 PM

what a picture this would make

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/25/2009 7:29:00 PM

Love the image of the bee atop the flower, Raul. Nice haiku! Love, Carolyn

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/25/2009 3:30:00 PM

Such wonderful imagery, Raul, in this perfect Haiku! Excellent work! Love, Robin

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/25/2009 12:52:00 PM

You make it seem effortless. But i know it is not. Love this. Haven't tried, been busy with my daughter getting married in a couple of weeks. Hopefully soon after! Love, Shar

Jane Bowen

Date: 3/25/2009 11:15:00 AM

Nice vision darling! Great Haiku...I love haiku's don't you? Well done ~ i love how you wrote honeybee....it's so cute and cuddly~ :) Love your style sir, it's all your own. Always a friend at the soupie...Jane

Jim Wilson

Date: 3/25/2009 9:58:00 AM

I like the way this captures and ordinary moment that says so much. Thanks.

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/25/2009 8:06:00 AM

This is sssoooo lovely, Raul!! ~ love, Carrie

John Rhinem

Date: 3/25/2009 5:17:00 AM

Yes, beautiful write Raul~wrapped within this pure innocence of love I would say! Some thing into to seem, to continually run through your wonderfully blessed veins! Filled with colors, thoughts and images, which concure with such as these assured truths; proven through your writtings over time! Excellent job my gifted friend!!!:):)

Tyler Martin

Date: 3/25/2009 2:54:00 AM

You captured a lovely scene with your pen. Tyler

Chris Goombi

Date: 3/25/2009 2:50:00 AM

Excellent title in this nicely penned haiku.

Danielle Moreno

Date: 3/25/2009 2:49:00 AM

Loved the last line, powerful imagery...........Danielle