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Pedestal of Flowers

As the flower grows,
The honeybee lands atop;
Resting on beauty.

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Steve Edmonds

March 29, 2009 at 9:57 AM

A lovely image, you did it justice. It's almost time to see the real deal.

Elizabeth Neal

March 27, 2009 at 10:16 PM

You delivery at paining a picture with words is superb. Love Elizabeth

March 27, 2009 at 9:41 AM

Nice use of imagery for an uplifting poem. The scene has me smiling and gives one hope that spring will eventually come. Thank you for your kind comment on my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen

Daniel Neal

March 27, 2009 at 3:17 AM

Enjoyed this lovely haku evoking spring so well. DN

Tyler Martin

March 27, 2009 at 3:01 AM

Serene write, plentiful with imagery. Tyler

Frank F. Atanacio

March 26, 2009 at 12:45 PM

what a picture this would make

Carolyn Devonshire

March 25, 2009 at 7:29 PM

Love the image of the bee atop the flower, Raul. Nice haiku! Love, Carolyn

Robin L. Gass

March 25, 2009 at 3:30 PM

Such wonderful imagery, Raul, in this perfect Haiku! Excellent work! Love, Robin

Sharon Winter

March 25, 2009 at 12:52 PM

You make it seem effortless. But i know it is not. Love this. Haven't tried, been busy with my daughter getting married in a couple of weeks. Hopefully soon after! Love, Shar

Jane Bowen

March 25, 2009 at 11:15 AM

Nice vision darling! Great Haiku...I love haiku's don't you? Well done ~ i love how you wrote honeybee....it's so cute and cuddly~ :) Love your style sir, it's all your own. Always a friend at the soupie...Jane

Jim Wilson

March 25, 2009 at 9:58 AM

I like the way this captures and ordinary moment that says so much. Thanks.

Carrie Richards

March 25, 2009 at 8:06 AM

This is sssoooo lovely, Raul!! ~ love, Carrie

John Rhinem

March 25, 2009 at 5:17 AM

Yes, beautiful write Raul~wrapped within this pure innocence of love I would say! Some thing into to seem, to continually run through your wonderfully blessed veins! Filled with colors, thoughts and images, which concure with such as these assured truths; proven through your writtings over time! Excellent job my gifted friend!!!:):)