Sotto Poet Poet Terzanelle

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Pebbles of Stigma In Stillness

When suited with loneliness, sorrow is seductive.
I reek trefoils and heed we bear a deep urge to relate.
My quest for commonality steered me to a lake fictive.

Pondering the twilight steam, so the lake whirls me to debate.
Ridden by the ethos, a lilac cloud goes to a grape.
I reek trefoils and heed we bear a deep urge to relate.

There are harmony and congruity here, just as kinship.
A slight wind doesn't sham the willow's sensory body.
Ridden by the ethos, a lilac cloud goes to a grape.

One thing I lack haunts a bustling life with true liberality.
In this world, even a hunter and prey may gain alliance.
A slight wind doesn't sham the willow's sensory body.

I wish to be vital for that globe, producing hot guidance.
This information might work with us exploring the world.
In this world, even a hunter and prey might gain alliance.

As I unwind in peace, I realize life follows a vital word.
To reduce interruption caused by uncommon conflictive.
This information might work with us exploring the world.
My quest for commonality steered me to a lake fictive.


Written: January 3, 2022

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Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2022 at 2:48 AM - You describe the qualities and values of a landscape really beautiful, Las - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar January 4, 2022 at 1:19 AM A poem with deep meaning. Life is so complex. Sometimes were at odds with each other, sometimes not. Great poem.

Valsa George January 3, 2022 at 7:49 PM In a world of ambivalence and contradictions, there can be connections and togetherness. Love the line- "In this world, even a hunter and prey might gain alliance" . This is indeed a poetic gem Lasaad.

Demetrios Trifiatis January 3, 2022 at 2:59 PM A celebration of poetic ardor, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Impressive and beautiful. Happy New Year!

Vijay Pandit January 3, 2022 at 2:50 PM Symphony of emotions dwell in your words my friend. You are at ease with so many poetic forms, Lasaad.

Tom Cunningham January 3, 2022 at 2:22 PM You take the reader on an amazing journey Lasaad, a very thought provoking verse. Hope your new year is off to a good start. Tom Sotto Poet January 3, 2022 at 3:07 PM Thank you so much for your kind words, dear friend Tom, And congratulations on your poems selected in the anthology. I hope you had a wonderful time celebrating the new year and that you are poised to make a fresh start in the new year.

Besma Riabi Dziri January 3, 2022 at 2:03 PM You captured my poetic soul by the impressive form of poetry I personally ignore and am not familiar with! But its spontaneous flow caught my heart! Your poetic glossary is as rich and profound as your thoughts! I so much relate to your insightful poetry, I pick this line which I find sublime! "In this world, even a hunter and prey might gain alliance". You amaze, Lassad, with your flowing poetic pen and mind! My warmest wishes for a Happy New Year! My deepest regards and blessings.