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Pebbles Crunching

pebbles crunching, snap red shirt, red and yellow koi, florals and forest ill-fated past bids goodbye hello garden paradise

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Bill Baker

Date: 6/9/2023 3:52:00 PM

Nice imagery in your fine Tanka, Kim. It's worth the effort, forthe outcome of beauty and peacefulness. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2023 5:18:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/8/2023 8:34:00 PM

Eden is just a pen-stroke of Kim R. away! Lovely, my friend.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2023 9:15:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Deb M

Date: 6/8/2023 7:39:00 PM

How beautifully you describe the garden paradise Kim….just lovely! Debx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2023 9:15:00 PM

Thank you, Deb!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2023 1:02:00 PM

- I have been working in my "garden paradise" all day ... lovely poem, Kim :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2023 2:45:00 PM

Awesome! I visited a nearby garden with my grandson. Nice time!