Pebbles Crunching

pebbles crunching, snap red shirt, red and yellow koi, florals and forest ill-fated past bids goodbye hello garden paradise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 3:52 PM
Nice imagery in your fine Tanka, Kim. It's worth the effort, forthe outcome of beauty and peacefulness. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 5:18 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Wolf Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 8:34 PM
Eden is just a pen-stroke of Kim R. away! Lovely, my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 9:15 PM
Thank you, my friend!
M  Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 7:39 PM
How beautifully you describe the garden paradise Kim….just lovely! Debx
Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 9:15 PM
Thank you, Deb!
Andresen Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 1:02 PM
- I have been working in my "garden paradise" all day ... lovely poem, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 2:45 PM
Awesome! I visited a nearby garden with my grandson. Nice time!
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