Peat Cutting Men

They toiled with hands like tree bark
As they cut through rotted peat
Stacking it in heaps to dry
Did not have to be that neat
Just so long as the Westerly’s
Could dry out the peat bog water
So it could burn on winters nights
Was all that really mattered
And they could sit in warm habs
With hot broth in their hand
Another day’s work completed 
And an evening’s rest began
Fine clothes for Sundays they were saved
So they could look their best
While thanking God in Heaven above
For this His blessed day of rest
When they could sit down at the pew
With Hymn book at the ready
To sing their praises to the Lord
With voices strong and steady
Then off to Pub to sup a pint
And  wild stories for to tell
Of how they dug for peat so deep
They nearly ended up in hell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/11/2014 10:59:00 PM
Hi Robert, I would like to extend my hand in welcome to the PoetrySoup community. Your poem speaks of the sad truth of how man toils to keep his existence and ends up almost becoming non-existent in the course of toiling. This is often true of miners and laborers. Very well written! There’s a lot to learn from each other here and hopefully you will have a great time while at it. Feel free to drop me a line when you can. I am looking forward to reading more from you. Vicky.
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Date: 1/12/2014 10:52:00 PM
Yes, unfortunately that's the norm. Most people just read and some comment but as you continue on the site you'll start getting more reviews. I wish you the best.
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 1/12/2014 2:32:00 PM
thank you for reviewing my poem and your kind words of welcome. I have had lots of views on the site but not many comments, is this the norm? Thank you once again will pop by to see your work. Andy
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