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Peat Cutting Men

They toiled with hands like tree bark As they cut through rotted peat Stacking it in heaps to dry Did not have to be that neat Just so long as the Westerly’s Could dry out the peat bog water So it could burn on winters nights Was all that really mattered And they could sit in warm habs With hot broth in their hand Another day’s work completed And an evening’s rest began Fine clothes for Sundays they were saved So they could look their best While thanking God in Heaven above For this His blessed day of rest When they could sit down at the pew With Hymn book at the ready To sing their praises to the Lord With voices strong and steady Then off to Pub to sup a pint And wild stories for to tell Of how they dug for peat so deep They nearly ended up in hell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/11/2014 10:59:00 PM
Hi Robert, I would like to extend my hand in welcome to the PoetrySoup community. Your poem speaks of the sad truth of how man toils to keep his existence and ends up almost becoming non-existent in the course of toiling. This is often true of miners and laborers. Very well written! There’s a lot to learn from each other here and hopefully you will have a great time while at it. Feel free to drop me a line when you can. I am looking forward to reading more from you. Vicky.
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Vicky Tsiluma
Date: 1/12/2014 10:52:00 PM
Yes, unfortunately that's the norm. Most people just read and some comment but as you continue on the site you'll start getting more reviews. I wish you the best.
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 1/12/2014 2:32:00 PM
thank you for reviewing my poem and your kind words of welcome. I have had lots of views on the site but not many comments, is this the norm? Thank you once again will pop by to see your work. Andy

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