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Peasant

Step forward step forward you peasant you. Time to chop off your head and lay you to bed, six feet under is where you will be all because you dropped my Danish on me!

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/16/2014 7:10:00 AM

WARM WELCOME TO POETRYSOUP!!! I am Olive :) I have been here in poetrysoup since 2012, allow me to say that I have allot of fun here and learning.. :) as you go around not only are you will be captivated by the poems, but you will be blessed with the wonderful people who are here!!! receive my warmest welcome here!!! :D God bless you.. :)!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/15/2014 3:46:00 PM

Hi Heaven, this is such a deep, powerful write. Best wishes.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/15/2014 1:09:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Heaven :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Hyler

Date: 7/15/2014 11:26:00 AM

Thank you for sharing :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/15/2014 8:48:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Heaven. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/14/2014 6:10:00 PM

Heaven, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jeremy Street

Date: 7/14/2014 4:52:00 PM

...."SMILE, *

Jeremy Street

Date: 7/14/2014 4:47:00 PM

~ *.* |*.*\(*{{....`KLove ~