Peasant

Step forward step forward you peasant you.
Time to chop off your head and lay you to bed, six feet under is where you will be 
all because you dropped my Danish on me!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 7:10 AM
WARM WELCOME TO POETRYSOUP!!! I am Olive :) I have been here in poetrysoup since 2012, allow me to say that I have allot of fun here and learning.. :) as you go around not only are you will be captivated by the poems, but you will be blessed with the wonderful people who are here!!! receive my warmest welcome here!!! :D God bless you.. :)!
Sietesantos Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Hi Heaven, this is such a deep, powerful write. Best wishes.
Andresen Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 1:09 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Heaven :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Hyler Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 11:26 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
Gibson Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 8:48 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Heaven. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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July 14, 2014 at 6:10 PM
Heaven, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Street Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 4:52 PM
...."SMILE, *
Street Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 4:47 PM
~ *.* |*.*\(*{{....`KLove ~
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