Peas In a Pod

They are two peas in a pod....this pair having fun I can't help but smile, as I sit on the steps by the old front porch, watching them romp on the cool green grass, in the warm winter sun This sunny little boy, with the gold in his hair And his funny best friend, wagging a tail here and there Their spirits are one, it is hard to divide them, And their souls seem half child, half canine, combining... Running the length of the yard as they play, Jumping the jumps as if one and the same Dancing the dance as they wear out their game.... Shaking my head, I must ponder the bond It's no wonder instead ...., as they're both gifts from God Squeals of child laughter, as loud as he can A wag of a tail, like a circular fan... If the child could wag and his dog could holler They would gladly trade places, I'll bet you a dollar Two of a kind, with spirits to spare That can cause one to laugh or pull out your hair ! From my perch by the porch, I'm watching them play Love is so simple, at the end of the day Filled by these moments, these small gifts from God Love is so simple, as two peas in a pod Here is a sample, just watch it unwind... Just as God made them...they are two of a kind........
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Date: 12/29/2013 10:47:00 AM
I just love when you write of family! a fav for me! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/29/2013 4:22:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem and congratulations on the fine win,Carrie
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Date: 12/28/2013 9:18:00 PM
Carrie, :) , CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my SMILE contest. :) Wishing you a Warm And Heartfelt New Year. Take care.... LINDA
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Date: 7/12/2013 9:50:00 PM
CARRIE, ~CONGRATULATIONS~ a fine winning poem in the "Little Lad and big Dog" contest by: Seren.... entertaining work... LINDA
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Date: 7/10/2013 8:55:00 PM
An excellent write, Carrie! Congrats! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/7/2013 8:48:00 PM
Congratulations for placing in the contest. Your poetic artistry is devine :)
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Date: 7/9/2013 10:22:00 PM
I can see you amended your comment Karen, so my reply doesn't make sense lol never mind
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Date: 7/8/2013 3:23:00 AM
Karen I agree and if it had been in rhyme would have been placed high...Seren
Date: 7/7/2013 8:14:00 PM
Lovely poem had to include it, i asked for the form to be rhyme. Too good to be totally left out.....Seren
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Date: 7/1/2013 7:44:00 AM
So sweet, Carrie. Boy and a dog. I need to be as inspired as you to do one like this!!
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Date: 6/29/2013 2:09:00 PM
Very pleasant picture you have penned here Carrie.Lovely read.
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Date: 6/28/2013 12:11:00 AM
lovely is this Carrie, so visual
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Date: 6/27/2013 9:29:00 PM
Love should be so simple. Absolutely. Wonderful setting in this piece! Excellent job!
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