Pearly Gates

Solidarity The bridge between Life and Death Aging Gray Clouds, HOME Inspired By Raul's " Inspiration in Haiku " Contest

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/3/2012 11:08:00 PM

What a crazy image I'm getting. I love your haikus; they stir up so much excitable imagery. Always, Laura

John Freeman

Date: 10/28/2009 8:56:00 AM

I Love this Haiku HG. It certainly is a personal thing this bridge between a man and life itself. Sincerely, Moses

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/6/2009 12:28:00 PM

Excellent Haiku, HG! You have painted such an awesome image here and like Karen has said, give us much to ponder! Love, Robin

Date: 7/18/2009 2:20:00 PM

There is so much depth for the reader to ponder about in this poem. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. I hope things are going well for you. Blessings, Karen

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/15/2009 11:45:00 PM

I think you will win..lovely interpretation from a special man. BG

Jared Pickett

Date: 7/15/2009 10:17:00 PM

Interesting... Did you win? Great poem.....:JP)