Pearly Gates

PEARLY GATES 

I’m brought before Saint Peter,
On display in a clear glass crate,
Nothing hidden up my sleeve,
Except a hammer, I jest to escape. 

He approaches me out of nowhere,
Ask him for a chat while we wait,
Gentle voice replies “of course son”
We’re summing up, there is no haste. 

Listen! played the hand I was dealt,
Although bluffed, behind a poker face,
Concealing more lies than honesty, 
Yet love always, outshone the hate,

At times life seemed unbearable,
Beyond all reason to procrastinate.
When younger I couldn’t get enough,
Though excess, simply led to waste,

Won’t bore you with petty details,
For fear deaths a pitiless place,
Bit late in the day, seeking salvation,
Begging forgiveness, no saving grace.

“Never said a truer word my child,
Crocodile tears, cannot work this case,
Condoned, condemned, in the balance,
On very thin ice, this verdict skates.”

“Whatever I say does not matter,
It’s meaningless gone past debate,
God alone will pass the sentence, 
Life’s evidence, will judge your fate.

By
David Kavanagh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/23/2020 9:32:00 AM
Great emotion from the man in the glass casket. Such reality no hammer can shatter but to those who are not encased goes its proclamation, “Trust Jesus. He died for all your sins. Repent...the time is now.” Enjoyed your poem, dear poet!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 1/23/2020 11:26:00 AM
Thanks again Kim for your kind words I’m delighted you enjoyed my poems cheers David
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