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PEARL OF THE ORIENT

Pearl of the Orient Seas surely am I in my strategic geographical position Heralding beauty and glory bestowed by the Almighty along my precious history Influenced with varied cultures indeed blest with unique identity of global impact Liberty-led, I’m propelled by my great citizens, surely freedom loving… Independence prevails over me, conquered by my heroes of valor and integrity Propped upon truth of sovereignty securing our territory with peace… Philippines am I, verily dear, prospered priceless gem to my treasured people Imparting to them my God-blest* of grand purpose and functional interest Nourishing every citizen with ideals upheld by constitutional nurture Effectively delivering services through officials who are responsibly efficient… Settled am I as shining pearl to the world marked by my FILIPINOS’ stature! *Psalm 33:12 King James Version 12 Blessed is the nation whose God is the Lord... February 10, 2024 Personification in Acrostic form 1st place, "Pearl of the Orient" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Jcb Brul; judged on 2/25/2024

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Date: 2/26/2024 10:00:00 AM
Magnificent! Congratulations on the win! Felt the pride, respect and responsibility shining through!!
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Date: 2/26/2024 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations, Beata. Way to go in presenting the Philippines. Your acrostic is beautifully written, right and left.
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Date: 2/26/2024 7:16:00 AM
Superbly creative, Beata. Much enjoyed your descriptions. BIG congrats on your TOP win.
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Date: 2/26/2024 6:43:00 AM
Being the child of the 'pearl of the orient', you, naturally, know about this nation more than any others. You have written your acrostic very beautifully. You have a beautiful style of personification. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/26/2024 4:35:00 AM
Beautiful Acrostic in personification form. Though I have never been to the Philippines, I have read from books and have heard from people that it is a beautiful land. I know you are a Filipino. You can be proud of your country and the land can be proud of you. Congratulations on your great win.... dear Beata.
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Date: 2/26/2024 3:15:00 AM
Congratulations, Beata. This is lovely, acrostic or not. The words flow and images unfold. It's a well crafted poem deserving of a win. Many blessings!
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Date: 2/25/2024 9:51:00 AM
I've never seen a double-Acrostic poem before. It's so creative, and beautifully written. Congrats, Beata!
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Date: 2/25/2024 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations dear Beata. This is an amazing acrostic! Thank you for you participation.
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Date: 2/10/2024 1:22:00 PM
just a lovely and well-written Acrostic...great contest contender. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 2/10/2024 1:13:00 PM
Superbly beautiful personal acrostic piece Beatta, a joy to read and admire, this is a Fav for me. Blessings, Gordon
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