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Pearl Harbor

A morning surprise, Many soldiers sadly died. Through the morning mist, The torrents of planes pierce through, Attempting to destroy us.

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Lawrence Ingle

Date: 12/19/2008 2:20:00 PM

This system failed on me. I hope you got my previous message.. Let me know...thanks for the upbuilding comment.....I enjoyed your poem. My dad was also in world war II in infantry over in Germany.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 12/14/2008 11:18:00 AM

We all remember this tragic day, beautiful write Raul. Love Elizabeth

Michael Torres

Date: 12/8/2008 10:39:00 AM

Raul your caring heart always show's. God bless you my brother. Michael

Robin L. Gass

Date: 12/8/2008 6:52:00 AM

This a perfect and beautifully written tribute to that tragic day. My parents both have clear memories of the shock and sadness that shook the world. Great write. Love Robin

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/7/2008 5:52:00 PM

We must never forget. In today's local paper were pictures of of 4 local survivors from our area, of that fateful day in Hawaii. All between 85 and 87 years old...Bless them for all those years they had to remember and the terrible things they witnessed that misty morning. That's for helping us remember and honor them. ~ Carrie