Debbie Duncan Poet Light Verse

Pearl

As I was walking by the sea one day
I came upon a fan of me 
For sure it was a rare sight to see

As I stopped to ask, what was it doing 
 Sitting there beside that deep blue sea 
He said, well,  I'm sitting here waiting

 Just for  you, So I sat down beside him
 To rest my toes in that deep blue sea 
As I stroked him ~ he purred like a kitten

He opened up just for me, and I could see 
At last, I had found my  PEARL of the sea  
It was my destiny waiting there just for me

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Suzanne C. Goudreau October 22, 2017 at 8:39 AM Powerful read, intriguing as well. It capures the reader from the very start and I could not wait to see what happened. Nice choice of words and descriptions. Imagery delicious and a message that is very poignant. A masterpiece!

Anna-Marie Docherty August 6, 2013 at 6:37 AM A little gem I found here - making me smile coming by today... thankyou for sharing and commenting on my Seaside Serenity - appreciated and catch you soon...

Kate Wilderson June 23, 2013 at 6:27 AM Awwwwwww...nice poem! :) Debbie Duncan June 23, 2013 at 7:18 AM Thank you Kate ;}

Bukang Liwayway October 7, 2012 at 10:34 PM very nice poem friend Debbie...thanks for sharing this. have a nice day always!! (^_^)

Lynn Dolly September 29, 2012 at 11:51 PM This is cute! I like it:)) Made me show my pearly whites..*smile* Debbie Duncan September 29, 2012 at 11:57 PM Thank you Sharon,,,, you have a blessed day ;}

Phyllis Babcock September 20, 2012 at 1:42 PM Just like a diamond in the rough you found your pearl by the sea. Nicely done. love phyl Debbie Duncan September 22, 2012 at 10:53 PM Thank you Phyllis ;}

Nette Onclaud September 20, 2012 at 12:33 PM lovable in all ways, debbie... such a poetic delight!..:) huggs Debbie Duncan September 21, 2012 at 5:12 PM Thank you Nette,,,,, love & hugs ;}

Jack Ellison September 20, 2012 at 6:10 AM A wonderful poem, dear Debbie... love it! Hugs and happy thoughts, Jack xox Debbie Duncan September 20, 2012 at 2:44 PM thank you Jack,,,, hugs to you ;}

Vesna Kovrlija September 19, 2012 at 11:21 PM This poem is so beautiful! Debbie Duncan September 21, 2012 at 5:37 PM Thank you Vesna,,,, have a blessed weekend ;}

Wilma Neels September 17, 2012 at 1:44 AM This has such a magical feel to it Debbie, you made me smile this morning :) enjoy the day ahead!! Debbie Duncan September 21, 2012 at 5:35 PM Thank you Wilma ;} have a blessed weekend ;}

Cecilia Macfarlane September 16, 2012 at 9:01 PM This is a treasure to read Debbie....glad you found yours : ) Hugs

Don Johnson September 15, 2012 at 3:53 PM LOVELY POEM HERE BABE... Debbie Duncan September 15, 2012 at 4:19 PM Thank you Don ;}

Lucilla Carrillo September 10, 2012 at 7:20 PM WOW! Debbie this is so beautiful. I can just picture you there by the sea looking at the peral. Thanks for reading my poem and also for sharing thisa one. Lucilla

Bukang Liwayway September 10, 2012 at 9:39 AM wonderfully written Debbie :) like it..have a nice day!! Debbie Duncan September 10, 2012 at 1:22 PM Thank you Maria ;} you have a blessed day .

Harry Horsman September 10, 2012 at 9:01 AM Oh Debbie, this is a Pearl, a wondrous poem, so sublime in it's simplicity, love this ever so much. Debbie Duncan September 10, 2012 at 12:52 PM Thank you Harry ;}

Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2012 at 6:47 AM So you believe in astral traveling? (from your comment on my last poem, I got the idea, that Have you done it??) Debbie Duncan September 10, 2012 at 12:37 PM Thank you for reading Audrea,,,, yes most defiantly I have done and do believe in astral travel ;}

Anthony Nutter September 6, 2012 at 8:02 PM A gem of a write, enjoyed this write.

Sara Kendrick September 6, 2012 at 5:07 PM Interesting work that leaves me wondering..Great job in writing it..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Robert Pettit September 6, 2012 at 1:26 PM You don't always have to open an oyster to find a pearl. Good write.

Poet Destroyer A September 4, 2012 at 4:12 PM Dear Debbie, I enjoyed the vision of you. And the sea, that resides in all of us. Their's something always out there waiting for our dreamy eyes and heart. Glad you felt the beauty of the pearl and sea... have a nice day...pd

Andrea Dietrich September 4, 2012 at 5:55 AM This reads like some dreams I have had where a person becomes an animal and strange but beautiful things happen. Nice! Debbie Duncan September 4, 2012 at 11:57 AM Oh,,, Andrea, I like your dreams of metamorphosis,,,,thank you for reading ;}

Jack Horne August 30, 2012 at 2:09 PM lovely write : ) Debbie Duncan August 30, 2012 at 4:18 PM Thank you jack ;}

Dinda Minardi August 30, 2012 at 8:19 AM A very good write, Debbie. Thanks for stopping by :) Debbie Duncan August 30, 2012 at 4:19 PM Thank you Dinda ;}

Debbie Guzzi August 30, 2012 at 8:10 AM It must have been a magical moment! Light & Love

Jack Ellison August 30, 2012 at 6:50 AM You had me going there for a moment! LOL A great write... hugs, Jack

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