Pearl

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June 3, 2024

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Teardrops fell… years of hurt and pain, encased in those little pearls of suffering and passion, created bit by bit, inside the shell of determination, Two parts of time - past and present, covering the most precious emotion, until it becomes a shiny lustrous object, Tempting to human race!

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Ink Empress

Date: 6/4/2024 1:57:00 PM

Very heartfelt and poignant write this is dear mala, youv expressed so well and written a poem that flows so well while depicting pearl from your soul! I especially love the lines “until it becomes a shiny lustrous object, Tempting to human race!” How profound and powerful! Pleasure always reading your work: sending you light

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/5/2024 3:25:00 PM

Dearest Poet Empress, To me, your comments are a drizzle of thoughtful, appreciative, kind words! This short poem is just a few spontaneous lines arising from my heart - sometimes not knowing why! I love to create the image of "Pearl" as teardrops. Love reading your brilliant poems too - with exceptional imageries and word choices. Thank you. Sending you love and warmest wishes ~ Mala