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Pearl-Eyed Riser

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Blue Waves usher ocean dream enchanting ripples, whose hypnotic spell oozes charm, for yellow dawn pearl-eyed first light riser’s inner fog, stunned by a heavenly turquoise canvass of tidal moss fleck swoon and swirl gyrations

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/3/2024 6:54:00 AM

I can see the scene. The ocean can be hypnotic if one is on the shores and not out in the middle. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 1/27/2024 10:48:00 AM

Brilliant imagery and flow of words, and amazing picture to go with your fibonacci. I loved the way you’ve delivered it. Congratulations on your win, thank you for sharing this

Howard Kerr
Date: 1/27/2024 10:56:00 AM

Dear Ink Empress, Many thanks for reading, evaluating, and of course considering my effort worthy of placement. It’s very much appreciated Howard

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2024 10:03:00 AM

Gorgeous, Howard

Howard Kerr
Date: 1/22/2024 10:31:00 AM

I appreciate your comment, Andrea. Thanks for your soupmail contact Howard

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2024 4:25:00 AM

Very descriptive work you have penned in this Fibonacci sequence. I enjoyed reading your work. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara k

Howard Kerr
Date: 1/22/2024 4:49:00 AM

Complements on my piece such as yours leave an indelible mark. They are a spur to future challenges. So pleased my work has brought joy to you Howard k

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/21/2024 10:13:00 AM

This resonates with me for the times I witnesed such beauty. Sounds of the wording move and swirl like the ocean. I like this Fibonacci.

Howard Kerr
Date: 1/21/2024 10:56:00 AM

I have learned so much as a writer from your precise analysis of this and my other submissions. It’s very complementary that this piece resonates with you. You noticed pivotal words that are the backbone of this work Howard