Peanut Butter and Jelly Sandwiches

Many children are picky eaters and I confess I was one 
It's a challenge to many parents and not a battle to be won
For trying to make a child eat what they don't want to try
Can be a battle of wills and make all those involved want to cry

My sister and I didn't like peanut butter when we were very small
So when were given P and J sandwiches we weren't happy at all
We refused to try it and not a bite went past our lips
Our foster mother scolded us with her hands upon her hips

We were locked in our room, until our sandwiches were gone
Being just six and four it took us awhile before an idea did dawn
"We'll hide them between the mattresses and fetch them later", we plotted
We forgot and she found then a few weeks later full of mold and rotted

She screamed and she hollered and vowed to make us pay
Lucky for us our foster father was not at work that day
She never made us P and J sandwiches again, we were relieved
For the next time, sandwiches from her bed she would have retrieved 

09/03/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/24/2015 8:33:00 AM
Hahahaha...LOL. I loved this witty poem... **7**
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 9/26/2015 11:01:00 AM
Thanks Angie, glad you enjoyed. Hugs
Date: 3/21/2015 5:32:00 AM
You go girl! Love this story of strong will. David vs. Goliath and of course the David sisters won.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 8/5/2015 6:13:00 PM
Thanks for the encouraging comment Maurice. Hugs
Date: 3/19/2015 8:21:00 AM
What a story *lol*. When I was a kid I hated Summer Sausage sandwiches and I hid them underneath the hot water radiator. It wasn't the best hiding place!
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/19/2015 8:39:00 AM
Ha, ha.....I guess we were both concerned about getting rid of our hated foods, not where we hid them :)
Date: 3/12/2015 4:08:00 PM
The story like quality brings a friendly feeling to the reader and we can smile at the thoughts it conjures. Emile.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/19/2015 8:40:00 AM
Thanks Emile, happy to have made you smile.
Date: 3/12/2015 9:19:00 AM
hehe, I enjoyed this one Cecilia.. If I think of all the things I didn't like to eat when I was still a child. Here in South Africa we call it Peanut Butter and Jam :) Ps: I love them, even today I still eat it lol
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/19/2015 8:41:00 AM
Thanks Wilma, glad you enjoyed reading my story
Date: 3/11/2015 2:10:00 AM
Ha,hahahaha... For me, if I didn't eat it, I wasn't going to be eating. So I learned to adjust. Ha, ha. Ah yes, I remember those foster parent days quite well. :o) Nice to see you stopped by my page.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/11/2015 12:30:00 PM
Glad it make you smile
Date: 3/10/2015 9:45:00 PM
Nice story Cecelia...I wasn't fond of Pand J either...hugs
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/11/2015 12:30:00 PM
Thanks Joseph
Date: 3/10/2015 8:51:00 PM
I recently watched an episode of Andy Griffith where Aunt B found a sandwich under Opie's pillow. :) I hope you had better foster parents the next time.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/11/2015 12:29:00 PM
Luckily we were in just that one home. Our parents reunited and another set of issues began. We took what we wanted but HAD to eat what we took.
Date: 3/10/2015 6:11:00 PM
good one, Cecilia. I have a story like that from my childhood as well, how I got rid of that terrible tasting vegetable alphabet soup!
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/11/2015 12:26:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, do tell! Is it already in a poem or do still you have to write it?
Date: 3/10/2015 1:49:00 PM
Such a cute childhood story...I wasn't a picky eater, but my sons eat nothing but pizza, chicken nuggets, noodles and cheese. :(It makes cooking difficult...hugs, Rhonda
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/10/2015 2:00:00 PM
Thanks Rhonda .......My middle son is my picky eater, it's a challenge for sure. Hugs
Date: 3/10/2015 1:38:00 PM
Delightful story to relate to us now for it, really, is so amusing but at that time it must have been a nightmare! Wonderful writing that makes one nostalgic of the time we were children, dear Cecilia!
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/10/2015 1:45:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios......yes were lived in fear for the three years that we were with her, I'm thankful my sister was with me.
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