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Peanut Butter and Jelly

Woke up this am and climbed out of bed. Slept with my shoes on and a song in my head. The beat grew stronger as the lyrics spread, like peanut butter and jelly on a slice of bread.. A word of advise before you hit the bed. Be prepared for your dream life and what's ahead for one never knows where dreams may tread.

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Date: 7/7/2023 5:16:00 PM
Fun dream poem, Nancy. I always keep a few dreams on my bedstead. :-) Thanks for the visit to my poetry today ... hope to see you again soon. A poet friend (to be) in Texas, Bill
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 7/10/2023 11:01:00 AM
Hi Bill, I hope that power grid holds out down your way. I have an artist niece in Austin and love it there, just too hot for a visit now. I appreciate your stopping by and also commenting.
Date: 7/7/2023 12:42:00 PM
A beautifully imaginative work, Nancy. Your creation exudes a delightful whimsy while subtly exploring the profound realm of dreams and their interpretations. This piece is an absolute delight, teeming with playful energy and yet managing to convey a wealth of meaning within its concise two stanzas. Truly a pleasure to experience!
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Date: 7/7/2023 12:24:00 PM
Even to a midnight snack of PB&J. So fun Nancy with an wonderful underlying depth of dreams and their meanings! So fun! So playful! So much said in two stanzas. Enjoyed!!! Blessings.
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 7/10/2023 10:58:00 AM
Thanks so much Sam. Your visit and taking the time to comment is much appreciated.
Date: 7/7/2023 12:15:00 PM
I love the whimsy of this, especially 'lyrics spread/like peanut butter and jelly' - made me smile :)
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 7/7/2023 12:20:00 PM
Thanks Michelle. I appreciate your visit to my humble page and hope you are having a blessed beginning to the summer.
Date: 7/7/2023 11:55:00 AM
its something I have never tried, and I know 'jelly' is what we call jam lol, if i wake up in the night its usually because I have a poem in my head lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 7/7/2023 12:19:00 PM
When I drive to see my ex which is only about 35 minutes from here some of these little tidbits end up in my head also. LOL I think the quicker my writes unfortunately turn out funnier and better.

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