Peacock in Woods

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My little bit of forest is hopping with happenings.

peacock in woods
long’ curb - feathers tightly tucked
a truant rainbow

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/10/2024 4:57:00 PM

Kim, there is some humor here! It's something that's disappointed many.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2024 5:05:00 PM

Could be. I was merely describing what I saw. I love when a reader sees more. Bless you!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/9/2024 5:15:00 PM

Your colorful haiku was a great pleasure to read, Kim. I love the last line. This is a fave for me. ;)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2024 6:25:00 AM

Thank you for the fave! Delighted that you liked this, Evelyn!

Paul Bell

Date: 6/9/2024 5:02:00 AM

You get the peacock, I get snails. If we combined forces your peacock could eat my snails.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/9/2024 5:05:00 AM

Do they eat snails…lol :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/8/2024 5:15:00 PM

Dear Kim, I always love your Haikus and this is another wonderful example of excellence. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2024 5:37:00 PM

I appreciate! Thank you, my friend!

Ink Empress

Date: 6/8/2024 3:28:00 AM

Ah yes when peacocks unfold their magical feathers it does seem like a rainbow, one that i havent thought of but you’ve made me think of it that way and whenever i see one now i will probably think of that: we do have peacocks few of them in family farm. Pleasure reading your work dear kim. Sending you light .Fave this is for me

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2024 4:18:00 AM

Thank you for the fave! The peacock just like any old bird until it fans out those lovely feathers. I was worried for it since the road is narrow and curvy.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/7/2024 11:58:00 PM

When I first saw the title, it worried me that the peacock would be in danger, but then I thought maybe they are a woodland bird. The poem put me at ease. I see he will not show off those beautiful feathers. I am happy to read this story.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2024 4:17:00 AM

Glad you liked and that your worry was eased. Your love of these birds, evident.