Peacock Blue

A
many
splendoured love-
a come hither
tail
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bird Avatar
May 11, 2009 at 10:56 PM
Brian! Brian! he's our man if he can't write these short forms no one can! Always a joy to read your vivid writes!
Winter Avatar
May 11, 2009 at 12:00 PM
Ha ha! Awesome! Love, Shar
Smalling Avatar
May 11, 2009 at 7:20 AM
The first time I saw a peacock as a child that was something like my thought ... poignant!
Gorelick Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 4:49 PM
I got a really good laugh from this one. Great! Bg
Richards Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 8:16 AM
Loved the humor in this.....yes...they do love to strut their stuff !!! (So do a few men I know...but won't mention any names!!) Ha ha!
Higgins Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 7:27 AM
This is very good ..love the title...the last three lines are great.
Reynolds Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 4:03 AM
lol Brian! You naughty, naughty boy, you! I know i sure like to enjoy a good day od tail-watching, oh yes indeedy! i love a good firm tail. lol. love this side of you, Brian! Kristin
Moreno Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 1:27 AM
Come hithe tail, nice one...Raul
Crane Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 1:08 AM
So many with that 'come hither tail' lol. I was at a manor house the other day looking at a wedding venue for a friend: they had a beautiful pure white peacock wandering around. It was enchanting!
Devonshire Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 12:43 AM
A "come hither tail," indeed, Brian! Where did you get this amazing sense of humor? I literally laughed, guffawed actually, right out loud. One for my favorites!!
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