Peacock Blue

A many splendoured love- a come hither tail

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Charlene Bird

Date: 5/11/2009 10:56:00 PM

Brian! Brian! he's our man if he can't write these short forms no one can! Always a joy to read your vivid writes!

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/11/2009 12:00:00 PM

Ha ha! Awesome! Love, Shar

David Smalling

Date: 5/11/2009 7:20:00 AM

The first time I saw a peacock as a child that was something like my thought ... poignant!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/10/2009 4:49:00 PM

I got a really good laugh from this one. Great! Bg

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/10/2009 8:16:00 AM

Loved the humor in this.....yes...they do love to strut their stuff !!! (So do a few men I know...but won't mention any names!!) Ha ha!

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/10/2009 7:27:00 AM

This is very good ..love the title...the last three lines are great.

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 5/10/2009 4:03:00 AM

lol Brian! You naughty, naughty boy, you! I know i sure like to enjoy a good day od tail-watching, oh yes indeedy! i love a good firm tail. lol. love this side of you, Brian! Kristin

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/10/2009 1:27:00 AM

Come hithe tail, nice one...Raul

Kat Crane

Date: 5/10/2009 1:08:00 AM

So many with that 'come hither tail' lol. I was at a manor house the other day looking at a wedding venue for a friend: they had a beautiful pure white peacock wandering around. It was enchanting!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/10/2009 12:43:00 AM

A "come hither tail," indeed, Brian! Where did you get this amazing sense of humor? I literally laughed, guffawed actually, right out loud. One for my favorites!!