Peacock

The peacock struts, it is a sight to see Spreading a fan of its color with glee Iridescent tails that are green and blue Showing off in mating rituals to view From a member of the pheasant family born If losing another, like anyone would mourn As they eat grain, fruit and seeds before flight Some people don’t know these birds can fly Often mesmerized by their beauty to the eye Heidi Sands 10/6/19 Placed 6th in the Writing challenge, October, 2019 Bird

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/25/2019 6:32:00 PM

Heidi, congratulations on your great win. Hugs Eve

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/25/2019 7:08:00 PM

Thank you Eve :)

Constance La France

Date: 10/22/2019 11:43:00 AM

Heidi congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/22/2019 9:13:00 PM

Thank you very much Dear Heart :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/21/2019 5:17:00 AM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/21/2019 7:35:00 AM

Thank you Jan :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/20/2019 1:04:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win, Heidi :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/20/2019 1:06:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise :) Have a nice day!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/9/2019 9:11:00 PM

Hello Heidi … a truly majestic bird indeed. One problem though is if two cock birds are at a distance; their constant calling can near drive you insane. You have described these birds really well - thanks Heidi - Lindsay

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/9/2019 10:44:00 PM

Yes, majestic Lindsay. I can imagine how that is! I appreciate your feedback and kindness :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/8/2019 6:13:00 PM

Love peacocks and those fab colors Hoping for a win for you Panagiota

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/8/2019 6:35:00 PM

Me too. Thank you Panagiota :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2019 5:06:00 PM

Very descriptive write heidi with super imagery. Our friends wish they couldn't fly as their neighbour has an ever increasing brood which decimate her garden :-( hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/7/2019 5:34:00 PM

Hi Jan. Thank you. Oh, that must be a problem for the garden for sure :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/6/2019 12:16:00 PM

Guess I am 'some people:' I had no idea that peacocks could actually fly, though I have seen them spread/fan their glorious plumage. Thanks, Heidi! :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/6/2019 12:23:00 PM

Thank you for all your comments Gershon and you are welcome :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/6/2019 10:51:00 AM

I love a peacock. Painted a mural of them in my office. Adored this one!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/6/2019 11:04:00 AM

Wow , that is awesome that you painted a mural of them! I am happy you like this. Thank you Caren :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/6/2019 8:10:00 AM

Indeed they are a sight to see..a majestic bird you portrayed in your poem Heidi..in colors of nature's wonder.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/6/2019 8:30:00 AM

Yes, they are! I remember being around a beautiful one in my childhood. Thank you Vijay :)

Silent One

Date: 10/6/2019 7:32:00 AM

You need no image for this, because you create it with your words... lovely poem.. great bird..

Silent One

Date: 10/6/2019 7:32:00 AM

You need no image for this, because you create it with your words... lovely poem.. great bird..

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/6/2019 7:34:00 AM

That is great to hear Silent One. Thank you very much :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/6/2019 7:26:00 AM

I would never have thought of a peacock... what a lovely poem!!! I wish you all the best for the contest. Blessings and love, Gina

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/6/2019 7:33:00 AM

Thank you very much Regina :)