Peach Triolet

Peach ripened on the trees
Red clay soil grows you best
Anticipation apon your leaves
Peach ripened on the tree
Juicy, fresh Georgia, peach. Bees
love the juicy, tangy, tongue caress
Peach ripened on the trees
Red clay soil grows you best.


My first attempt at a triolet, not my favorite poem.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 2/2/2010 8:38:00 AM
you did well and it is fun to try new forms. LThank you foru your comments on my win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/1/2010 7:02:00 PM
Sounds so good thinking of peach pie Doris. You are making me hungry with this poem. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:46:00 PM
Now, I'm craving a peach, Doris! A perfectly sweet Triolet! Great job with this your first attempt! Thank you for reading and leaving your always, kind comments for me. Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 2/1/2010 3:37:00 PM
Oh, but its wonderful ... just fix your typo in line #3 ... should be a "u" for "upon" ... smile ... I've never tried this form either ... your much more adventurous ... smile ... I really like this with its imagery I can feel the juice running down my chin ... LOL ...
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Date: 2/1/2010 10:43:00 AM
Thanks for your nice comments Doris and for leading me to this sweet triolet. Keep up the good work Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/1/2010 10:28:00 AM
Beautiful poem,indeed yummy.Charma
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Date: 2/1/2010 9:55:00 AM
Great write in this one. You have given a great tribute to the Georgia peach. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Mom
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Date: 2/1/2010 7:42:00 AM
Peachy keen Doris.. good job at your attempt.. reads good to me.. peaches are a treat... like your sweet poem.. today.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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