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Peacefully

Obituaries like to say
About how someone died:
"Peacefully at home" and yet,
I wonder if they've lied.

Just once I'd like to see in print
That So-and-So passed on
While kicking up the biggest fuss
Until his strength was gone.

When Dylan Thomas wrote, "Do not
Go gentle," what he meant
Was not to peacefully succumb.
(I wonder how he went.)

I hope that when my time arrives
I throw a major fit
And that my husband tells the truth
If he posts an obit.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/30/2015 6:12:00 AM
What's important about an obit. Is that someone wrote one and showed they gave a .... . :):(:)))) Please forgive the crassness.
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Date: 12/29/2015 10:07:00 AM
"in posting an obit" might serve you better for an ending. Still I think it's excellent. Well done!
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Date: 12/29/2015 5:11:00 AM
Hello! I've written my share of obits, too. What really gets me are the obit photos – most are smiling or much earlier in age. Also enjoyed your bell bottom poem. Never really took to them, though. Didn't like anything about the topsy-turvy 60s. Thanks for reading The Buck, one of my very first poems. Best to you. / M
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Date: 12/26/2015 5:09:00 PM
ha ha love your style Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx7
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