Peacefully

Obituaries like to say
About how someone died:
"Peacefully at home" and yet,
I wonder if they've lied.

Just once I'd like to see in print
That So-and-So passed on
While kicking up the biggest fuss
Until his strength was gone.

When Dylan Thomas wrote, "Do not
Go gentle," what he meant
Was not to peacefully succumb.
(I wonder how he went.)

I hope that when my time arrives
I throw a major fit
And that my husband tells the truth
If he posts an obit.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Johnson Avatar
December 30, 2015 at 6:12 AM
What's important about an obit. Is that someone wrote one and showed they gave a .... . :):(:)))) Please forgive the crassness.
Mcleod Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 10:07 AM
"in posting an obit" might serve you better for an ending. Still I think it's excellent. Well done!
Rigoler Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 5:11 AM
Hello! I've written my share of obits, too. What really gets me are the obit photos – most are smiling or much earlier in age. Also enjoyed your bell bottom poem. Never really took to them, though. Didn't like anything about the topsy-turvy 60s. Thanks for reading The Buck, one of my very first poems. Best to you. / M
Allison Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 5:09 PM
ha ha love your style Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx7
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