Peaceful View

Tranquil slapping waves,
The cool air off the ocean;
A soft gentle breeze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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January 5, 2010 at 9:15 AM
Many congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week, Happy New Year to you >> James
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January 4, 2010 at 12:12 PM
Beautiful use of imagery. Enjoyed the view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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January 4, 2010 at 3:25 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Steve. May you have may more. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 12:10 PM
Steven, congratulations on making the first round of the contest, best of luck...Raul
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September 25, 2009 at 3:15 PM
Yes, indeed a peaceful view. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 3:53 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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September 24, 2009 at 10:24 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Steve. Love, Carol
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December 16, 2008 at 5:12 PM
I have been by the ocean and it is beautiful...........nice poem
Neal Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 11:40 AM
Great haiku, I like writing haiku's. If you get a chance check mine out. DN
Neal Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 11:22 AM
Wow, this is a stunning haiku. love the scene you painted here. I can close my eyes and imagine this.
Gorelick Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 8:07 AM
Just finished looking at your work which somehow I've missed. You are a master of the short form. This is lovely, I want to be there!BG
Winter Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 6:15 AM
Wow. Extremely inviting. Well done! Love, Shar
Moreno Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 12:20 AM
This also is a beautiful scene, nicely written. You are a painter of words my friend...Raul
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