Peace Sun

I woke up this morning and said a prayer for you,
the sun shines through my blinds and it's a shame i can't be there with you
your heart beat creates earthquakes,
your tears bring the rain,
and for the second time it has flooded here again
I'm sorry if i disappointed you,
I'm sorry if i ever lied,
because what i'd do to go back would mean
i could reverse the time that you died.
sick to my stomach i can't bear the thought,
but when the sun shone through this morning
it brought a peaceful thought back to my heart
through out each day i kneel down and pray
and know you're living in the sky
I try making wishes from stars flying by
but the sight must be quicker then the blink of my eye
i'll never know why,
til it's my time to go,
I look around this city realizing all friends are faded foes
I can't hold on, i hold it within,
it is my faith in peace that keeps me from disintegrating within.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/5/2012 6:02:00 AM
Such powerful & emotional lines, especially the last two. Fantastic. I noticed you haven't posted anything new in awhile...you should. :)
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Date: 2/22/2012 11:59:00 AM
Paradox. Your poetry is a challenge. I like that. Love, daver
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Date: 2/22/2012 7:34:00 AM
I am stopping by to thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry. I enjoyed reading yours today. Have a wonderful day and please continue sharing your poetry G T. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/21/2012 9:53:00 PM
beautiful writing...is that your own work vienna?
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Date: 2/21/2012 9:10:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read Lisa :) This poem was dedicated to a good friend of mine whom passed away at a very young age not too long ago. I have found that Writing poetry is a lovely way to work through the hardest times in life. Again Thank you for the feed back
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Date: 2/21/2012 8:11:00 PM
such sad poetry :) glad I stopped in for a peek!
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